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Five Star review here, and this isn't me being shameless.
I've written quite a few books, but none are like this one. You'll understand once you've read the first few chapters.
The story gets many surprising twists and turns, and it isn't your usual Overpowered Mc novel.
Trust me on this, this story is definitely worth your time.
I never thought I would see a book like this here a bit unique at the same time a bit classy paragraph can be shortened a bit,,maybe this is start of new era on webnovel!!
This review is as of chapter 25. I will rewrite this at a later time. Likely chapter 50-100 sometime between then.The book is worth a read. It has many strengths. But with it comes a few glaring weaknesses. Gramatical errors are few and far between. The authors ability to write is decent. A couple typos and missing words every few chapters but it doesn’t hinder the reading experience.The main character seems pretty decent. He’s enjoyable to be around and I can say with certainty he’s likeable. What I thought was going to be a garbage trope between the nobility and our Mc was trashed. Instead I have a unique fresh breath of air. The mc plans to not hide his strength (to an extent) and the “young master” role is filled by someone arrogant yet understandable. The biggest issue lies in the world. Our main character is constantly bullied by soldiers despite being just a child. It’s upsetting in a bad way. It seems pathetic and makes the viewer see them as a joke. It isn’t the best system. It feels often forced that he is bullied just for that tragic upbringing card to be played even more. But other than that I’ve yet to find any glaring issues. Good read worth everyone’s time.
hello don, i read ur hwbs ,its awsome,i want u to read " the protagonist are killed by me" and make some novel taking inspiration from it, i bet u coul make a gr8 novel out of it, the original has good concept but not gr8 execution
One of the best novels I've ever read, with a good background as well as good character development....so far so good, so keep up the good work?????
Really like how you used the concept of rebirth as a POV.It is really interesting and hpfunny at the same time.Synopsis is interesting and cover is really pretty to!
This story is absolutely amazing and one of the best bleach works out there though the only problem is how it’s updateds are inconsistent but as the author said he dose this to pass the time so can’t really complain about it. Keep up the good work??????
Shameless author review. Please support my novel, thank you all in advance! I hope you like my novel even though I still have a lot of shortcomings as a writer.
I'm not saying this novel is bad or anything. I just wanted to say why do writers love to make the protagonist have to go through the family drama complex? They weren't even his parents, and what made the most sense was that his real parents and family were still on earth, and he was here acknowledging them as new parents to him?Is it so difficult to make a protagonist who doesn't have to be reincarnated into someone else? Why not just make the protagonist transmigrate with the created body he wants?That's why I'm fed up with cultivation novels where the protagonist is reborn as a baby or reincarnated by entering someone else's body! It was clear that he still had his real family and parents on earth, why did he have to admit they were like new parents to him? Maybe if he was an orphan or a lonely person who had no one on earth it would be understandable.Sorry, if I were in the position of the protagonist, I would tell them the truth, I would tell them that I am not their biological child, because their child has died and I am only occupying his body. They probably won't believe what I say or at worst they'll think I killed their biological son and occupied his body.I also have another choice, as long as I occupy their child's body, I will distance myself from them, I will cultivate until I become very strong, then I will create a new body for me to occupy, with that I will return their child's corpse to them. .The point is it doesn't make sense that you have to go through a family drama, because they are complete strangers to you.
Terrific novel. Needs a little push so that people can see it for the gem that it really is. Highly recommend giving it a shot for mystery/detective work genre lovers.