Her presence reminded them about the odd rule in the organization: thou shall not discriminate nor underestimate your opponent's gender. Alas, before their mind could function, it was interrupted by her words, again.
'Jasmine.' She thought.
However, when Elias attacked him, he instinctively moved, after that, he could only continue moving, guided by his heart
"Woah, I just felt a massive chill going down my spine. Are you feeling cold too Anna?" Seriously, what is wrong with the weather of this timeline. How can there be such hot sunlight and yet such cold winds at the same time.
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"That attack is child's play, this is how you attack with winds." She said "Wind Bullets." Wind Bullets is a tier 3 magic, it makes wind sharp when focused on the casters palm. And then the caster shoots it to its target, it is faster than Wind Cutter.
Me encanta, de verdad es una magnífica historia, en un día ya me he tragado la mitad y aún no puedo parar de leer!!!! Es genial!!!!! El problema es que tengo examen mañana así que matadme porque voy mal si sigo así. Demasiado viciante!!!! No la recomiendo si tenéis cosas pendientes que hacer porque engancha muchísimo!
"I overheard your conversation with that guy in the recording studio------Zhao Ge called him 37? Umm, I heard you talk about your flight date to Seattle. I hurriedly changed my airline ticket to the same day and hoped that I'd meet you on the airplane." He laughed and began to lament his own foolishness. "At the time, I just thought that being on the same day would be enough, but I forgot that even if it was on the same day, there are many different airlines. By the time you arrived at the airport, I was already boarding the plane. So I still didn't get the chance to talk to you."
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Hello Author Pen,From the first few chapters that I have read I can say that it's a engaging story, esp with the start and how you introduced comedy side to a xianxia novel. I really like it and it's new. The writing is so well done it's very easy to understand and it's engaging.
Honestly, this is absolutely amazing!!!! ?
The writing Quality is very good compared to most web novels with few typos here and there, so no comment on that. No comment on update stability to, it pretty good. Sigh! Mc 's personality... Don't even get me started, he is literally psychopath, cold, cunning and calculating, his dialogue with other characters aside from System can be summed up within 300 words, this book literally follows the law of power. Most of Mc's interaction is with the female system, who for some reason of hot?. Which I think is a ruining point, as how can Mc and the system have a physical relationship? Also, Mc literally has 'skill' do become invincible for 2 minutes, why does he need to use so much strategy? Half the charter is literally wasted in strategy and thinking not to mention side character, they are literally the embryo of foolishness. I get that their action is real and justifiable naturally however you didn't gave them much screen time for us to feel them. For instance, Ling Fei could have been better well written if we got to know more about him even tho, he was just fodder introduced for us to learn about the world setting, Mc's tactics, powers, and hierarchy. Also, you tend to focus on micro rather than macro, most people don't know complete psychology, body language, and premium English speaking ability to decode your character thoughts and metaphors... Like some interactions are smart beyond need. Also, Mc's lack of sympathy and morals... Mc should have saved Heaven fall scet because he had shared the night with saintess of the sect and not because he and his family was insulted.Most the time Mc literally has straight face. like make him feel fear sometimes, he is in front of an absolute powerhouse yet he sips his tea while keeping his composure. Also, you making his family mysterious as the story progresses is not needed at all. At first his family was the judiciary and now they also carry assassination... You were lucky because you have written the maid ( shadow guard ) on a mysterious basis that this was possible but don't put so much mystery on the main character or his family. We just know he has powerful bloodline, family, and body physique yet all are unknown at the moment while his powers are all sealed. All, Mc does is make strategy, moves ten step ahead of the enemy, and manipulate them. Like when Mc knew, the harem member was absurd by her father, Mc should have slaughtered the father and sect instead of manipulating them whole and keeping them as dogs. I am really not a fan of cold, cunning, sharp, staying in shadows, and making plan types of villains. He is powerful, he should fight everyone head-on. So, it's a 1star from me.