Aoki is putting another masterpiece to paper here. He has a way of making characters fun to read about and get to know that is hard to find in other novels, even ones that have thousands of chapters, he gives them depth that let's you know not just what they contribute to the story, but WHO they are behind it. The background to this story is well thought out and well introduced, on top of being a premise I have not seen from any other author yet. What's updates 2 chapters a day, I don't think I've seen any of Aoki's books drop behind on updates since I started reading his material. Overall I have and will continue to recommend this book and all of Aoki's others to anyone who reads.
OH MY!! I really recommend this novel!! This cutie FL were different from other FL. So far, it was fun to read this novel....I just hope, everyone to enjoy this fantasy novel!! Ugh can't wait for another chapter!!:) BTW, i don't know but when she cursed, i feel like 'WOW THIS GIRL CURSED EVERYONE LIKE IT WAS NORMAL' but it funny duhh
i <3 it, its rly good and interesting. i need more and more its like a drug?
Seriously I have been forced to write this review, even though I had only read 6 chapters... For what reason?It's simple, its a good story but the author simply could not fully describe his thoughts (for me) and inconsistent with the use of words/terms/phrases, like the description of his parents, of having cat ears and tail but in the "Status" what was written in the race is that they are human instead of hybrid (human+monster) and one more the author said that hybrid is a slave for both human and demons, so how could his father become the mayor of a village?If the author could just make a revision to the previously posted chapters before putting updates to solve the inconsistency of the story it would surely increase its quality and readability, and lessen my frustration ??...I suggest that the author do some proofreading and editing before posting a chapter cause this is one of his common mistakes. ?So I'm gonna stop reading this story for now, and try again in the future, hope that by that time you made some revisions/amendments... ?
The new chapters show a lot of potential. The occasional comedy bits make the story engaging, and the combination of pervy master-disciple makes it refreshing. Although this type of novel(male-female persona) is a bit hard to maintain consistency till the end, I hope the story maintains the quality till the end.
You should put a meme and parodies tags here!!!!??? Anyway.. The idea is pretty good, but, this chapter seems rushed. There are also things that can be fix about the way you narrates this story. I recommend to use third person Point of View when you write more chapters. Well, I can't say much because you only have one chapter for now. I will review again when you have more chapters!! Don't give up!! ᕙ(＠°▽°＠)ᕗ
Definitely after reading your story, our dear author I would like to say that the plot twist is completely commendable. I will surely gets excitement everytime you update, also how will the story will derive and makes us wonder what’s next part of it.
Let me just say this - the pacing in these chapters is absolutely ruthless and I am obsessed. We open with Lin Tianyang's family visit, which is already uncomfortable, and then the author does something brilliant. Right after Lin Tianyang leaves and we're feeling disgusted at his calculation, BOOM - we cut to the Xue family. 'How is this possible? Comrade Lin doesn't look like that kind of person.' The reader is sitting there like... no, actually he absolutely does. You just watched him. This parallel structure between the two families reacting to the same man is so efficient. In one chapter we get two perspectives on Lin Tianyang's true nature without the author having to tell us anything directly. Then we cut to Su Xiaoyin at the Yuan house and the pace shifts completely - it becomes warm, domestic, almost slow. The basket weaving, the rabbit, the cooking. And then she drops the proposal and the pace accelerates again. Every scene transition serves a purpose. The house sale discussion at the end is the perfect button - practical, forward-moving, and it gives us a sense that Su Xiaoyin is finally taking control of her own destiny. The author never lets us rest, never lets us get comfortable, and that's exactly why I couldn't put it down.
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This book feels like coming home after a long day at work.It's relaxing, calming and soothing. Like a walk through the woods, or the feeling of having submitted an assignment and no longer having to worry.To anyone who would like to EXPERIENCE a well-writen story that leads you by the hand in an extremely pleasant manner, then this is the story for you.I can only hope the future content continued to be the same level of excellence as this has been.
I give a 5 star. Surely one of the most creative imaginative reads I have ever encountered. I am left in awe of how you came up with such superb content. the names of the cities and how you class them, simply magnificent.Im gonna travel with you to the end of these superb work. keep going author.?
coool !! nice one ! hmmm looking forward to new chapterss !! H........A.........N.........D..........S..........O..........M..........E.........Y.........E.......T..........S..........I............N............G...........L...........E