The tense slipping made it a bit hard to get into at first, but seem to improve as the story when on. There’s a lot of telling, which if turned into showing would raise the tension for the reader. Overall I enjoyed it and can’t wait to find out what happens.
Awesome, still enjoying the story
This was a very good book!
please hurry
The next book in the series, The Dark Alpha's Unwanted Luna, is now available on the app!
Author keeps changing Characters names and the grammar is horrible. No real substance to the story. Don’t waist your money.
Awesome book
I love this book.. also I LOVE CREED I call dibs if he happens to find himself single.. I mean, just putting it out there
complete!!!!!How? in this way!Seriously!
This book is a piece of shit. I have never read a more weak & pathetic FL. People are writing any shit these days.
Loved the story
This is exclusively good. nice job