The 200th round of Inter-Galactic Origin Training has begun. New worlds, new lives, new missions. The choices are yours to make. Good luck and may the Celestials shine upon you, Trainee Valeryon II.
The tense slipping made it a bit hard to get into at first, but seem to improve as the story when on. There’s a lot of telling, which if turned into showing would raise the tension for the reader. Overall I enjoyed it and can’t wait to find out what happens.
