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Great story, Great Characters, if you love a story with good writing quality, this is definitely it.
Good up until a little after chapter 150. It got really boring and felt like everything was drawn out and it made me start skipping chapters until I just gave up
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Writing quality: Very good grammar, it is good to see new books with good grammar on Webnovel, really like itStory development: The story starts interesting and I, what a suprise, like it. She grows stronger and can evolve, to that is the system no stupid cheat which makes her op. Character design: She is a normal typical girl, a bit crazy sometimes when she sees beautiful people but cold when needed, which I truly like on herUpdate stability: 2 chapters a day is very good, a mass release was there a while ago too, so 5 stars, nothing else wouldnt make senseWorld background: Nothing much yet is known, but the story doesnt even have 100 chapters yet, but it is promising( Is she in Tensura? )My personal opinion: I like that there is a fmc which isn't the same cliche one, it is refreshing, with her growing party members which I hope won't be that big( cannon fodder not included), loved how she handled her first noble, hope that that with her brother won't be something stupid, Good luck with the story
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It really is a good job, with present story contexts that I am passionate about, there is interference from the system that always interests me in what new you will bring
A unique story. Different from any other book you've ever read. A story of pain, loss, and absolute world domination. Civilization system will blow your mind.
Please leave a review so I can enhance my grammar and also how to write more story.Also please guide me in writing some of the novels and also, I hope I can request someone who can make a picture of my novel?It will really be a great help.Please enjoy reading my first time novel.Thanks again guys!
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There is a lot of fantasy out there that it is easy to get turned off. That is because a lot of it isnt good. But when done good, fantasy can be engaging. This is fantasy done good.
I am proud to say that i am the 8th person to write a review for this master piece. This novel in this webnovel website feels like a diamond in a truck load of $hit. The MC is not at all dumb, very minimal plot armour, no 1 dimensional villans, MC actually being talented and is only relying on it instead of being some dumb lucky b@stard, creative writing (this is almost non-existant in this website which is mostly for below average or trash authors). Finally, if you are a person who is tired of reading novels with idiot MC's aided by their ridiculous and illogical plot armours in their face off aganist even dumber, 1 dimensional villans....then this is the kind of novels you would want to change to. I can say this because i use this website regularly and i belong to the above category. So dont miss this master peice.