A tree's personal brain child born for the Brand new year of 2025 given five stars to symbolise the five in 2025...Yeah I'm just giving my own book five stars :)
Good so far. The beginning wasn't so pulling but as the chapters went on, the author was great. Dialogues could be improved to feel more natural
I really like this story especially how MC evolve with each contact with his past life personality. Besides, the plot of getting the maids is amazing, as well as growth of their relationship.
This is a fascinating work that explores human sins in a fantasy setting. interesting concept and entrance into the realm of sins. pity the update is only one chapter a day. keep up the good work
I would have put all stars but the truth of the matter is you update slowly. This is very interesting but you don’t update frequently enough and always leave us in suspense. I just want you to work on that but either way it’s a great story.
good story worthy of giving try and to add on collection.
good but u need to release at leatst 2 chapters a day it Soo good no cap just an honest reaction they all said after manhwa/webtoon it's light novel but iIdidn't believe man if one wants to start this is a best start w author
Hey guys this is a spinoff from the Creo Creatorius series which is all about the adventures of Athena Ardenvain as the "Light of Elderith"
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Hello, Ash_Mira is here!! OP MC? YES! Read the free chapters and you'll know how OP the MC is. Harem? YES! The MC will have more than three as his wife's.Action? Of course!! If you love reading a detailed fight, then you would definitely be in love with this novel since the fight scene would be explained as in detail as I could. Kingdom Building? YES! Because the MC will start a coup d'état and take the throne of the kingdom and eventually … SMUT? YES, BUT! Smut chaps are going to be once in a while since this book isn’t focusing on smut. Even though having an intimate moment can help the MC become stronger, there will be a restriction on it. (Will be explained in the story later)So, if you want to read a ‘good book’ with a smut scene only once in a while, this will be the perfect book you’ve been looking for.Though, you can also skip about the smut chap if you don’t like to read smut, so you guys are very welcome to read my book :)) If you have any questions about the novel, don't hesitate to ask in here!
Okay author-sama. So I feel like you have a solid idea for a story. However you messed up on world building way to quickly and try to make up for it later. You also need to fix your system of using (him, her, I, our, them, they) if you wish for a better story you need to stay away for using (I). It makes your story unreadable. Got to chapter 40. I hope you can review what you written and maybe make a rewrite so the story flows better because I believe you have a solid plot that can make a good story. Hope my review helps in anyway.
Looks interesting, will check it out later