The characters are amazing and well defined. The plot of the story and its development are well organized and sequential. Credits to the writer for having such amazing novel.
haven't read it but wanted to show my support for the concept.Would love to see more of these sort of stories on this site. each better than the next in some way or form. ill update this once I have a read a good chuck. Also, hope the author does not drop this and perhaps ride it till the finish line. Even I don't like it, there's just something about a complete story which hits different.
It's the best of the lot by far so yeah it's alright but it's more that all the other ones are not very readable, still pretty good though it's enjoyable
I only managed to get through the first 6 chapters.... The grammar and syntax are beyond bad. The author miss-uses tenses a lot. Infact he interchangeably uses them in every other sentence. Even the average 6th grader should have a better grasp on atleast the 4 simplest and when to use them: Simple past/past progressive and simple present/present progressive. To the author: I am not trying to disparage your work but you are honestly not that gifted when it comes to grammar, either study up or get an editor to do the work for you. One last thing: even in the earlier chapter you are artificially inflating your wordcount. You are creating needlessly complicated sentences that no one understands and break syntax. Keep the sentences short, it will improve flow, you'll make less mistakes and the reader will in no way be confused.
to be honest I feel this book is misleading it could be great if it was written carefully . but it jumps and is hard to follow .and I'm just really disappointed.
I am enjoying to read more. Alex is sweet and smart to not friend with his bullies who talked about Alex, "poorest loser". I didn't like his bullies but I love to see they will open their mouth on a ground when they will see Alex is a millionaire now.
disappointing the man who is in the future 6.1 is not the money he has to go to the bathroom to make me quite uncomfortable and not do that to you and your mom
marvellous setting , character of mc is too good other character are good but need upgrading and dimension in their character more , also drop the novel story is going direction
Lin Fan is this same with Lin Fan of The Strongest System?? Well if it is definitely looking forward on this one considering TSS. Giving it 5 star just to show my support on this one.
The main character is a bit of a jerk.He appears to be a show off in the series who is a good for nothing without the system.He has excessive pride but the story is still a good read after reading plenty worse
I am giving this a one star just from the synopsis. Like what is the mc’s gender!? Boy or girl? Like wtf! And there were some VERY clear grammar errors showing the author didn’t even bother with the synopsis. Cough* capitalization errors. Honestly, not going to read and just going to leave a bad review. You are very welcome.
The poor editing and overall lack of flow make it difficult for me to recommend this one to anybody. The 4.8 rating mystifies me. Does it improve dramatically further in? I couldn't be bothered to find out.