"Hey! What are you doing here?" Azzie showed up...
After 120+ chapters I can honestly say this is one of the worst mc's of all time the mc has 3 of the most overpowered systems ever but somehow this author managed to make them completely useless the mc is a weak pathetic idiot there is 0 character development and most of the chapters are useless filler.
Please keep the novel uppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
First of all, this novel's system is good, I loved it. military system is interesting, and spawning soldiers directly, not by buying them or finishing a task to get them, is much interesting.I imagine, in the future, when the MC advances, these three soldiers level up, and if anyone is dead, he has to summon another one, level zero, and start training it again from scratch.Nice idea, keep the good work, and added to my library.
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Note to the author, stating what was said or that something happened takes the effect and action out of the story. Details are your friend and will help your story. also have your characters actually speak instead of saying that they spoke about something, this will add life to your story.
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this is only to balance out the authors shameless 2 5 star reviews :D honest author reviews are the best reviews
man this was a pretty good read I hope you could keep writing it, I really enjoyed the premise for it............................, .........
another great fic just got dropped.One of the best i read recently. daaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnneeeeeeeedddddddddd
although I'm writing this review pretty early in the story, I will take it down if it doesn't live to my expectations.Unlike other stories I may just have the main character be a nobody or something like that, this character has that and the writer than multiple chapters to really allow you to feel relating to the character instead of simply using it as a plot device. This add depth and fleshes out the story as a whole.
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