kealiirangel
I love your novel! It is a great story! I’m a representative editor from Stary.ltd. If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *).
To be completely honest, i went into this book expecting something good, but really isnt. the MC doesn't practise, doesnt really train and acts more like a 2bit villain than anything. Oh, this guy annoyed me? let me ambush and kill him after school. oh, that guy has something rare that could help me, and hasnt done anything to antagonize me aside from ignore my 'obvious' greatness? let me find a way to poison him and take it. Im over 100 chapters in and the MC has spent a total of like 6hrs actually trying to cultivate and the rest plotting to kill/steal his 'enemies' or make money.
its title should earth weakest magus or a author who likes to toture main character.Or mc who likes to get betrayed or author is a sadisti have read around 400 chapters its all about frustated mc . his spell using only know one spell hard skin other spells are learnt just for the name sake and keeping at bay reader when will he use it .
Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????Translation becomes MTL after chapter 100??????
As long as the mc doesnt get ntred then I will read… anyone wanna tell me if mc gets cucked?
Wait,he buried his fiancee?...,............
first of all, the writing quality is not bad but also not perfect either.second, character design not bad usually the mc is a pet shop owner at almost every novel that i read.third, for updating stability idk because i read it when the novel is a new as "trial read novel" and world background is standart, i say because it only begining of the novel story.Last of it, the story development is something that i don't like it, to fast pace development for a vet pet monster and to chaotic that i think slow and steady normal development and suddenly mc have to many pet monsters before 50 chapters this is a vet mc not a pet shop mc or an adventur/tamer mc this is just ridiculous for mc got 3 pet monster from the museum to fish gambling to pet monster mall one after another also to many detail that make the development make sense for example you need 2 or 5 status shard to make a complete status as system say but in some chapter the requirment had change and for grading pet monster power and rarity is to jumble no consistent because of this development, that i think this novel will stop at chapter 40 and never will continue
Trash and everyone's fking annoying and idiotic idk why these bots are spamming 5 stars and those annoying side characters flattering and commenting and then u know what i mean
This book is quite intense. There's a lot of plot development and the characters are interesting. Can't wait to see where the author goes with this story.
let me just start with read This!??????? There's only a few books in my life that have ever caught my attention and this is the best one ! I love the characters and how the author describes them❤❤❤keep it up Author
Pro: Good grammar, writing quality is very good compared to other novel’s on the site. Con: idot mc. He chooses not to Increase his stats using the system even after being nearly killed multiple times. Granted he does end up using them but he chose to remain weak for a very long time. I do understand having the mc be stupid, Naive, or weak but he has had multiple wake up calls and refuses to answer them. Pro: world design is very good. Especially with the way its shrouded in mystery and everything isnt given to you upfront like many novels on this siteCon: thus far side character development has sucked im beginning to wonder why they are even there. I digress im not fully caught up on chaps but thus far instead of caring about characters I either wish for their deaths, especially Erik, Or i’m just plain indefferent about their wellbeing.Pro: despite his shortcomings MC seems human which i really enjoy and some of his actions actually make sense which I really enjoyThese are my thoughts thus far and I do apologize if the spelling sucks WN turns of autocorrect on my phone.If anyone thinks in wrong about any of these feel free to reply
Hey there!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
