well till 100 chaps in webnovel. And i think in later on this issue is not that much noticiable
d*mn imma have to reread or else I wouldn't be able to post a review, my memories all jumbled and sh*t now. still smacking myself for not having a backup file for all the novels I've written a review before the great reset.
Why do I feel like its still lacking, like what about when is he going to return to his original planet
ill try this thing, will give opinions when i reached chaps 50 and 100
How is Natural born Killer a Non-insult?
Its a decent novel, I just hate the fact that it has some racist parts. The start was quite good but the later parts gets a bit absurd. Though, toleratable. And the MC relies too much on the system and old world works, how I wish he could also learn to use such knowledge and create something of his own cuz once the old world works cheat gets done he might be a bit done for.
it’s not a bad novel, but the plot holes get bigger and bigger as the story progresses. The author seems to constantly forget his own explained powers and treasures all the time. Not to mention ridiculous oversights like the entire human population starving while being surrounded by sea life. He constantly forgets that there are spacial storage items and teleport formations around and often goes through “oh no, we can’t possibly ship all this food safely!” Or “oh, this army is trapped here and I can only travel in and out with about 50 people!” When a few dozen chapters prior he did things like store tens of thousands of people in his sleeves and a couple hundred chapters prior it was explained that there were many storage items that could hold an army for traveling through a portal around. Also the amount of times that ridiculous plot devices are used to prolong an enemy’s life by saving them over and over again, and the sheer ludicrously dumb decisions that the higher up people make about not removing an enemy when they have a chance to and instead leaving them in a place where they can steal most of the treasures of the world while massively improving their forces and wiping out humanity is just stupid.
The story preview is eye catching so I read it. First chapters are good, however as the story progress, it becomes very dis appointing. Though, I still kept a postive outlook and finish the story. I think the end is incomple. This is the worst of the rencarnated story that I read. This is the first time I encountered a CEO that is powerless in a literal amd figurative sense. Alot of loopholes in this story which if I pointed out one by one, it will not fit in this page.
It's not the ending the chapter incomplete, there's still more chapter they don't post here
So far it's been a great read. I'm very intrested to see where you take this.
It's a really great start. I really want to know how it continues ?
Okay! Now, this is the first time I am encountering this way of writing in webnovel.It is a fresh concept.I read chapter 1 and it is intriguing with a nice twist.Cheering you on author.Keep updating