kealiirangel
Im shamelessly writing myself another review since webnovel hates putting my stories in the algorithm. YOU CANT STOP ME WEBNOVEL!!!
Definitely better writing quality than SUUSB. I can't even put it into word it's like a professional author wrote this.This is amazing, you should read it.The culture, references and mythology is pretty accurate the only people I found was with the unrealistic economics not even countries can move 33 Trillion dollars in a day it is literally impossible.
Dropping my review, despite only reading a chapter. The precise and short words used to describe the characters and the situation easily captivated me. It actually felt more of a paperback novel rather than a webnovel, it didn’t add any unnecessary words, it was clean and grammar wise, perfect. The premise of the story felt like sherlock holmes, though it is interesting it downplayed the story since it wasn’t completely an original especially since I read most of Arthur Doyle’s work. I hope this novel won’t dissapoint, considering my high rating and expectation of this work.
An extremely well written story. A real quality work. But, there needs at least 10chaps/day for it to truly be perfect ?.....,................................,.................. .......
first thing first, how the f someone with unranked talent don't get seat? where the f they sit before getting the talent? floor? and why the teacher think it can help to motivate the student even thought evolving the talent is very hard, impossible even. the future is just a fking cliche over and over and over and over oh and over.
i am enjoying the book
I love reading a few times every single chapter how the “Tuffin families is one of the eight prominent families in the milkway galaxy”.
I like the storyline, but I'm not gonna read further. I just saw that it's over a thousand chapters and still updating. I'm dumping this book. I hate overextended, prolonged stories like this that pan like a TV soap opera.
love it. very interesting novel. most important, it's a story.
very nice story
It’s been about three weeks and still no updates posted from the author. Sure hope she is OK. Maybe when we do finally get an update we will have lots more chapters to read at once.
The story was going extremely well until it became a constant repitition and over explaining everything. So many opportunities for David to spend money, like for example at the Sect to make sure all his women \\"friends\\" have the resources they need, definitly could have spent a good trillion or so!!
