I am loving it very much, looking forward to reading it. Every thing is well explained and lots of experience can be gained from it. Well I love basically all (except horror).
we've been promised world background soon and the author has been able to develop amazing worlds so imma believe him. it's great. also there are many well written characters. only one is kinda iffy but the author has always been able to give characters definable characteristic so I'll believe the author will fix it.
If you like Buddha's Palm but want more actual buddhist you'll like this novel. So far a great read and setting up an interesting future-------------------
So far, just slow enough to make you enjoy the slice of life. There are some cliche things like handsome looking main character, but the pacing elevates it.The only bad thing I can say about the novel is the translation quality.
Every society has some tough virus. Which are very harmful to humans. I hope from this story, everyone will know about harmful viruses in society. This virus starts in teenage. Those who can keep themselves safe are healthy thinking people.
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wow! !wonderful...what a book the book is really awesome...clap for you...keep up the good work author... I would be right here with you
It looks like author is new, so there are many mistakes.The story feels monotonous, without any emotion.Characters feel shallow.World background is not detailed and is written in confusing manner.And after mc appearance in story, other characters become weak and dumb. I will not spoil it, when you read it, you will understand after seeing so many prisoners.Conclusion:- Below average ?Reading status:- 17 chapters
The story itself isn't bad and there are rarely any spelling mistakes, the problem only lies on the character interactions as every time mc interacts with other people it feels forced, and the stories pacing feels rushed but i'd read this rather than another monster integration, great story but has an mtl translation so bad it physically hurts my eyes
Interesting novel, nice story development. good sex scene but when will you come and complete it? And the rest of your novels.pls we are waiting for you. Thanks
Obligatory self-review from the author! Giving myself such a low number, just to make the rest of the score seem more realistic :D Will change that once genuine reviews will start appearing here.For the story:If you are naive kid, then you shouldn't read books involving ***** themes like smut, gore or psychological warfare. As such, begone. I already turned too many people on the bad path with my other novels. Warnings:There will be smut in this novel. Not just mindless **** that you can google and get with sound and video attached, but a smut that will be caused by the story and that will serve the story.At times, there are time-jumps between chapters. Unless the story is directly continued as if there was no chapter-split at all, then suddenly a random part of the story appearing is the result of the time-skip.This novel is the absolute pinaccle of what I can write right now. While the chapters in general will be mostly lighthearted, the same cannot be said about the true plot of the story.Thanks for supporting me and I hope you will like this novel at least as much as I love to write it!(For curious, yeah. This is an indirect continuation of the other "While others cultivate,..." of mine)
Pretty interesting. Almost like a xianxia version of The Legendary Mechanic in some respects. Looking forward to the rest. There are some minor typos present, but the story is engaging and the world so far feels well-developed. More importantl, the mc's growth doesnt seem to be getting rushed not is it dragging behind. Slow and steady wins my good impression:)