this is a blatant rip of pokemon, which took a surprising amount of time to become evident since this must have been done with Bing instead of Google. I'm 60 chapters in, have achieved a migraine trying to decipher whatever is going on in this story. Can't tell if it's a system, a artifact, a reincarnation vr glitch troupe or what. at times it can seem like any arrangement of these 4. writing quality at best deserves 2 stars, but it takes so long to hit that point that you've already suffered a stroke trying to decipher the plot. even being free is not incentive enough to get past chapter 50. DONT WASTE YOUR TIME
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WOW, what did I just read! this is very captivating from the very beginning and the way the author keeps the suspense floating describing the personalities keeps you bound to the book. Keep up!
Imagine a world in which a Chinese author did not have to compulsory brag about his awesome country by putting down his new living environment at every opportunity.I don't know about your country, but if you compare your education system and level between 1980 and 2010 you would probably find an increase in knowledge and skill. Mc is one of those internally racist and discriminatory people who have no clue about anything, but are unsatisfied with everything just because it is different.His investment ideas are almost equally stupid. Imagine trying to invest in Apple in 1980. Yes Apple existed at that time, but it was practically worthless until after 2000. Even Microsoft would have been better. Or IBM or Toyota. Literally any in 2020 well known company that existed at that time would be better. Nintendo also only really got going in 1985.
I like the story so far and the story do not focus to much on the the female lead.That might be my problem with the story, also. so far as I have read, thr emperior malelear seem to dominate more of the developmet of the story and plot morr then the female lead as the resume would make you belive. But overall it is a good story and worth too read if you like the genere.
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The mc is one of those special types of brain dead mcs not like the usual dic for brains but the ones that have zero iq points at all. Like they are programs following a character template and dumb storyline. Where you question actions don't have the consequences they should. Overall this is not a serious novel it part plain, part gag, part normal, part dumb. It blurrs a lot of lines not in a good way though.
The main reason I love this novel so much is mainly the premise and the fact the demon lord and hero recarnated together near each other and also the jokes get me sometimes and lastly I really enjoy the characters and how the story is going so a 5/5 for me personally.
Idea of the story is great. The MC got reincarnated in a whole new world.
Character and background of the story is well described.
The only problem is writing. There a little bit grammatical mistakes but they can be ignored easily as the story has a smooth pace.
All and all though the work has great potential.
Well done Author!
Waiting for more chapters.
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It's not going to be everyone's cup of tea, so I won't lie and say it's the best novel on this site. Give it a read, if you aren't interested in the first ten chapters then you probably won't fully immerse. However, I must say it was worthwhile writing this, so I'm sure it's going to be worthwhile for some of you to read this as well.Review:World Background: As of now not much about the world has been explored as it is still very early into the plot. Though I have plans of creating a massive world with its own history and politics, we will have to wait and see if I have the ability to deliver.Writing Quality: Though I speak English often, I am not a native speaker. That's to say, my writing is readable, but not impeccable. However, I don't believe that it takes much from the quality of the story, but you will notice a few errors here and there. Story Development: The pacing is rather on the slow side, though it is to be expected with the type of story I am trying to create. As of now, not much has happened in the plot, but it is indeed beginning to thicken,Character Design: I try my best to give my characters depth, and though it does not show now. I have already set the foundations for future character growth and hence dimension.Overall an average story told by an average author. Though you would do well not to assume you have any clue whatsoever where my novel is heading. The media I consume is vastly different from that on this site, and my end game will go in a different direction from most third-rate work that is devoured here.Happy reading.
Highly Recommeded Novel for all readers interested in Dark Fantasy!