Finally decided to rate my book. If I don't cheer myself on, who will. Anyway, hope to create more exciting stories for you guys. This novel is a modern fantasy, I promise it's worth the read. Contains mature Scenes, read at your own risk ?
Hansora is here with another pristinely written novel!! There's no time for red flag males when she introduces such a wholesome ML like this. He's everything a neglected girl to want and, it turns out, the FL is just that. Seeing him swooping in immediately makes me look forward to their every interaction. Knowing Hansora's past stories, I just know the sweet love will be so real!The drama from the start reads so smoothly I can picture it like I'm watching a TV show. It's fast paced and everything you could want out of a romance novel. Grammar is also top notch. You'll be hard pressed to find mistakes or inconsistencies in this book. It's really amazing the quality the author is able to maintain through each book she's written. Definite recommend!!
Finally a book worthy of me ratings. I love it man
Take little time and make it a beautiful creation . Really Good,Take it till end ........................................................
Nice plot! This novel is amazing, I advise you to read it ??
Author Review: - This is my first contracted book, so go easy on me, mates! 1. This book Is Not harem, at least not at the moment. 2. This book has no smut, yuri, or yaoi. 3. The Mc is weak at start but will get stronger as he faces difficulties. 4. My focus is on character development. 5. Yes, there will be gore/ violance even mental breakdowns. 6. The Swallowed Star inspired me to create something similar, and I did my best to create this story. 7. if you have any other questions, please ask me below.
Overall, I like kingdom building stories that take modern elements and apply them to a different world and this has that. That characters are written well and I do enjoy the story. If I had to give some advise it would be to get a thesaurus or use chatgbt to give the author suggestions so I’m not reading the same phrases over and over again. If I tried to play a drinking game and had to drink everytime I read gravity, weighted, measured, or tone, I’d have died in the first ten chapters. But I’m sticking with it for now.
The story is great with everything, the MC is a bit cocky but anyone with that much power would be so pretty realistic, the world building is also quite good. the only bad thing is the fights lasting a dozen chapters each and while some are entertaining, most just feel too stretched out.
The writing quality isn't anything to write home about there are a couple areas on misgendering going in between him and she on the same character multiple times but I can get past that and I know this is supposed to be a slow burner but how the hell is the MC still in the academy after 100 chapters like that's just ridiculous another problem I generally have no problem with fanfiction that are slow burners as long as the fic has a couple hundred chapters but the main reason why I generally don't stick around that long is because half the time the author's dropped the fanfiction before it ever gets good and I generally speaking I hate it whenever the MC always tries to lay low to not show off because 90% of fanfiction mc have no reason to do so but in this one I will let it slide because he's in the hidden mist
Hi fellow author!I’ve really enjoyed seeing where you’ve taken this so far. Your story is absolutely captivating, and I’m eager to see what comes next. Seriously, don’t give up—I’m here to keep your spirits up! Not that you need it, but hey, good job! I’m loving every bit of it so far.Oh, and if you have a moment, could you check out my book? It’s a fantasy adventure titled Bellator: Rising. The story follows a hero’s journey in a world I’ve meticulously crafted from the ground up. You’ll discover a unique mana system, intriguing species, various countries, and rich cultures, each with their own religions and laws.This is my first book, and I’m genuinely eager to get some feedback. Whether you’re an experienced writer or just a fan of fantasy, your insights could really help me improve. I’m bracing myself for any critique, no matter how brutal, so let it rip! Your honest opinions would be invaluable.Thanks so much for considering giving it a read.Best,IkarisP.S. Your feedback would mean the world to me!
even though I haven't read completely but it's interesting story
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