So I'm thinking, you're going to kill the main character, aren't you? I've read something similar, but it's a dead God, not a God of undead. And it ended sadly! (the truth is that such a character CAN't live! Such an evil, paranoid, hateful person cannot exist in the world for long. The very essence does not allow)
This story was off to a decent start, with only a few inconsistencies, but it quickly went downhill from there. The author introduces several new elements to the story, only to suddenly remove them, as if he decided to suddenly change the direction of the story, with so apparent purpose, but the biggest issue I had with the story is the redundant info. In almost every chapter there are one or more entirely redundant paragraphs that either told me absolutely nothing or something that's so obvious a toddler wouldn't need it explained, and as a result I found myself skimming/skipping a lot of the story, and probably missing some of the important stuff. Author should really work on prioritizing what info to keep along instead of padding the story in excess, i.e. a full paragraph of monsters nearing the camp, but MC just had to release his aura so it wasn't a problem anyway. If it wasn't a problem anyway, don't bother telling people about it.
Really? you dont want my spirit stones? you dont even allow me to pay you! this is a stupid move. im droping this crap novel.1234567891011121314151617181920
I am the ruler of the heavens and all realms. I came to the earth unintentionally. After seeing the talents of the earth, I felt that the earth has potential. So when I left, I created 500 sets of systems like in the novels you read. , As long as like and reply 1, you can get the supreme system, and you don’t lose money. Don’t wait for the time to regret. So, what are you waiting for?
it's not bad but not good either. it's hard to tell how good this story is because it's Translate is bad. so far, this story is around 2-3star. I rated 2 stars because it's really badly translated, or I hope it just badly translates. its writing didn't seem too good, all things considered. but again, this could be due to many translations problems. hopefully, this story can be rewritten or edited as this would be a massive improvement. but doubt it as webnovel, and most of the writers aren't like royalroad writers. who will rewrite parts to improve their story. hopefully, in your next story or later in this one, we can see improvements to your writing or translations.
The xenophobia is strong in this one! it's still a pretty good read though..................................................................
an average quality CN webnovel, brought down by bad quality machine translation, "translator" just pump out as many chapters as they can and didn't bother to edit, and correct any mistake. Don't bother to pay or vote for this novel just read free machine translated one.
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im getting some serious deja vu rn, oh wait it's a complete copy pasta of someone else's work. go figure. and he actually made it locked at ch.6 LOL
Note: I only read 4 chapters.It felt like I was watching a case study in my crim course. The protagonist was chilling to read about, not because descriptions were detailed but due to his reckless decisions and lack of stress in the moment of crime.Despite being written in first person there are actually a lot of points that go unexplained. Decisions are told to the reader then acted upon, not really elaborated on further. It’s a missed chance to get to know the protagonist’s thought process more.Contrary to my previous comment, I think the author has fallen into a trap that you can easily fall into when you write in first person—telling rather than showing. The beginning of the prologue is a good example, there are clearly a lot of emotions but it’s mostly being expressed though monologue. It ends up looking like a rant someone tweeted rather than words in a novel. Describing using literary devices like similies and metaphors can go a long way.Grammar wasn’t terrible, just missed some capitalization of words after the end of a dialogue and a few contradicting use of tenses. At one point there was a section that written in past, present, then past again even though it was referring to the same period in time. I wish you the best on the rest of the novel, Author!
Looks like someone knows our MC's weakness.Wait for my other releases and know the real reason of our MC getting weak because of girls.I hope others can wait for the challenge that our MC will face. So please keep reading my first time novel.
Tbh, I am puzzled why others are saying that the first part of the book is only good and it gone downhill after that. In fact I almost gave up during the first chapters because I found it to very cringe, a system who can copy other super powers, another ruthless wannabe mc and etc. But I gave it a chance and it turned out that it was actually a great read. Actually I find this book very interesting, it gives a glimpse of how things would looked like after a post apocalyptic world. Here in this book, the world is ruled by organisations called "consortiums" basically they are like a company who controls political and military power. It is centered around a so called "strongholds" there are approximately a total of 178 stronghold, each stronghold is like a city where it houses hundreds of thousands of people. And there we can see that this alliance of stronghold is the what's left of what's left on the once brilliant civilization of humanity but was ended after a nuclear war. Each consortiums have their own number of stronghold basically they can be describe as a country each having their own strongholds. Now, each strongholds have their own so called "refugee towns" and the treatment of refugees is vastly different from a citizen of a strongholdNow let's talk about the mc, the mc is actually well written for me, although I had my own misconceptions at first due to reading to much ruthless wanna be mc in other trash novels, from what I read there is actually a reason why he turned out that way, first of all he is a refugee and in the refugee camp in a post apocalyptic era human rightsnand morality is something that will be laughed at by others, it's a dog eat dog World. Most of them would scramble for food, even killing others to steal their foods and belongings and most likely anybody would become ruthless if they want to live. From what I read in other reviews , they said that on the later part of the story they said that the mc feels forced, stating that he gone too soft from a ruthless guy to someone who would save others even if its supposed to be inconvenient form him. from my experience of reading almost 1033 chapters, Ren Xiaochu experienced growth guys, in the past he used to be ruthless and uncaring for others except for his younger brother because the situation called for it, he is weak and grown into a place where it is kill or be killed, but as times goes on his powers also grew, he met a lot of people where he experienced friendship, and found people whose light haven't been corrupted by the sorrows of their era, such as Chen Wudi.