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Haven’t read this book yet but I don’t understand why villians have harems (saw harem tag) it just puts me off imo would be better if their was no romance or only 1 female lead
Your trying to put too many things into movement. Focus on one part of the plot and improve on that then the story will be easier to follow. However, i like this story even though its slow paced at times its also intresting. Deffinately not one of those stories you can flick through easily you gotta commit to enjoy this story!
bro continue this novel it has potential and also it will surely make you popular. all things are good if you add plot twists.concept to earn by cleaning is a unique way of thinking in novels. if you are reading this then think about it.
Only a non-monke would fail to look upon this work of art with fantastic awe and utter amazement at the poetic intricacies and beautiful tones of absolute truth. Thank you for creating something that may be brought into the future as new generations arise and require teaching. May monke bless.
I..I.LOVED IT, damn the story it is quite interesting. I love the character of Dexter's mom and dad can't say a lot about Dexter cause there isn't enough story of him. But first few chapters were boring or maybe author was building the story I don't know but I like how it is truning.
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I haven't read any chapters yet but the synopsis makes this look very interesting. I'll leave this at a 4 star review and change it when I read enough. For now hopefully this isn't dropped because it looks like it'll be great. Thx keep it up
The plot is great MC got reincarnated where his father loved him and got married to a nice girl but feels sad for the girl for her family sold her for 100 gold teals. MC loves the girl very much he shows that I spite of being a crippled he shower the loves she need as the wife of a man. The girl Zhang Xiu he saved he should first cured of the demand cultivation and the face since she deserved it. He should helped her in getting revenge and make her his second wife as he deserved of the person she is.
Everything in this story is good except for the unrealistic aspects like Nicole's constant pouting. you shouldn't pouting an Apocalypse no matter how stupid you are
I see Hungarian author I read, (as Im also Hungarian).The cultivation is unique so I like it, the mc is not stupid so that's good too.. Can't say too much about it as im only at chapter 48, but I think its worth reading. (Not giving 5 star cause Hungarian author,)
In the beginning, it wasn’t a “Dark and Stormy Night” nor “Once Upon a Time”... but rather a line that grabbed my attention. When I started to read this story I was instantly pulled into the lives of the... “...Long, bony fingers gripped...”
