The only pro is that the MC is OP and has a good base to start from.As for the cons:1> Author tried to put in mystery and failed miserably ( too much of anything just gets annoying and bad ).2> The MC is a Naive snob who doesn't know the value of anything. He has been protected his whole life so doesn't even know slums exist and is waaay too idealistic.3> The only ambition he has is to 'make his father proud' which is quite honestly just downright sad as it seems his entire character has been molded to present him as a good prince.4> People don't want to start a war against his father and yet they discuss war to take control of Julius???????????
Awesome i lovE it
You definitely feel as if you are the mc. It has a good foundation from the start. Needs a few minor tweaks, but this does not take away from the story or flow at all. Has a really good start and for me a unique outlook. Keep up the good work author!
The novel is fairly paced and is realistic in a way that the MC shows human characteristics such as concern and love instead of just being a monotonic killing machine as expected from many apocalypse novels. The author gives a new and refreshing take on dungeons and the tower trials itself. This novel will keep you reading till the last chapter.Overall, an amazing novel recommended for those who like dungeon and gamelike novels as well as restart novels.
Uhh, please anyone comment ;-; i wanna see what I'm doing wrong and what i should do better because next time i would like to start an actual 'Good' quality Novel. But if i need to continue with this novel i will just to gain Experience on what to do later on anyways cya ;-;
Nice novel to read & so inspirable story for our life. I learnt many things from this story that how to handle yourself in critical situation in front of entire community.
The plot is unfolding quite nicely. Love the little anime references here and there. Eagerly waiting for the upcoming chapters. Kudos to the author!
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One dimension story with anything goes. You read this for the stop gag comedy but cold jokes every line makes the story incoherent and it becomes a 5min lame reality comedy show every chapter.
(2+1+1+3+2)/5=1.8the story is as bad as the title. a lot of cliched script and interaction.dumb development. and more.editing is good to be fair.just think Pokemon with all of Ash's dumb moments and multiply that by 10. you might be a little less annoyed than I am and maybe as disappointed
I’ll start by saying that what I read seems well written for the most part I rated the book low because There wasn’t a review pointing out a few items that I think are important. One of the auxiliary chapters talks about alignments, I got to chapter 42 and the MC seems closer to neutral evil to me as opposed to Chaotic Neutral. The MC seemed quite pleased with the despair exhibited by a character when she found food missing. Everything from the bait to the trap to me points to evil.Some people like evil MCs but I don’t, I can get behind the actions from the prologue but both interactions the MC had with people don’t seem neutral to me.Reminds me of a character from elsewhere, a great healer but while healing she would activate the pain receptors in her patients as she liked causing pain and it was her price for the healing. Obviously she was an antagonist.
Thank you! here for the ahem....research. So far so good. Hope to read more of your ahem, research.As for the rest of the story, it is a little more or less the same as others in this genre. The main difference would be the plot line seems a bit slower as the author does not rush into the gaming portion right after reincarnation.