Not Orphan, even has an annoying older sister, basically a resource leecher. Not my cup of tea.
I liked the work, especially this power system. The cultivation part is very similar to the author's other novels, but this spirit and beast system is really cool and reminds me a little of a book I read, "Jekua." I don't know if it was inspired by it, but it reminded me a little.The characters are cool, most of them seem to have a unique personality and not just be another NPC.Overall, a great work. I'm eagerly awaiting more updates.
I love your story too much , everything is fine, world, story development and so on, but i hate when MC is a chess piece rather then players( I know they are his parents) but what value you get when your son is grinding and as a parents you are watching like movie, just stop this shit author, MC should do his own journey rather then going through their parents plan,, I'm dropping after 49 chapters..if you write next novel, I'll read then, i don't want waste my coin on this pre-planned parents baby shit
The story is just starting out but I seriously love it! Even at the start you can tell that there will be some epic character development as the MC experiences more and interacts with more people. Super excited for this one and definitely recommend giving it a shot!
unfortunately a very generic stereotypical story if you can even call it that because it is painfully slow with a lot of unnecessary repetitive dialogue and a lot of filler chapters: multiple chapters with just 'good morning' and descriptions of eatingEvery single conflict basically reads "How dare you do that to my young master" "dont you know who i am?" gets slapped, humiliated, comes back and rinse repeat... the characters have zero personality growth and the MC is painfully stupid forgetting constantly about the things he has aquired (MC gains an invaluable item to awaken a bloodline and simply does not use it at all), at times even his own system.There are so many inconsistencies in the story among which one of my favorites is that his sister gets a 1 week leave from the academy but the journey from her academy to her hometown takes more than 2months already with countless perils along the way to which she would have died multiple times over... another one being the MC staying at the exact same cultivation (peak spirit master) for 2 entire months while reaching there only took what? 2 weeks?futhermore the MC complains on a regular basis about the arrogance of nobles yet every chance he gets he regards everyone as lowly mortals - quite ironic.The only character i genuinely feel stands out is Xi Meili and author does her dirty by making her a walking garbage disposal unit.I saw a lot of potential in the novel when i started reading despite the overly pompous way the characters talk but due to the before mentioned points said potential was in my opinion sadly lost.
this book is very interesting. Story is nice and female lead is awesome .
(Good thing I didn't use my storage magic.)
Hello readers, Author hereRating my own novel seemed so ridiculous at first but since none of you did, I thought I should so here I am.This novel is not like other villain novels where the villain goes on killing non-stop, but this is a revenge drama to be exact with villain as the protagonist.Feel free to share your views in the comments, it helps in understanding and overcoming mistakes.
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This is a well-written story in an interesting world. It's a bit too early to talk about character development, but so far the characters come across as genuine.I definitely want to see how the story develops, and see more of the world, both inside the city and eventually (hopefully) outside.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?