A long time ago... there is a novel with only 2 locked chapter. Everytime its update a new chapter, its stay the same. Now, the locked chapter suddenly invade... without news, like a shadow.
Filling up the minimum letter count so that I can shamelessly review my own novel as a masterpiece.
It's easy to read, I don't really know about grammar or such things so I can't really tell if it was bad or good.. sorry for that :D
But what I can tell is, that you put a lot of work in writing in it.. so please continue your good work :)
This story is really good. The beginning was a little slow, but when you read more of it, you won't be able to stop. Five stars!!!
There is some small mistakes such as grammar and other small things, but you won't really notice.
I'm not really sure about the stability of updates, but in the last few days, there has been a new chapter every day.
Although the beginning of the story was a little boring, it quickly became very interesting and exiting to read.
The story has chapters from another POV than the MC, and even though these are kinda boring to read at the beginning (because the MCs POV is always exiting and you get kinda pissed off when you have been wondering what would happen after the last cliffhanger, but then you get a non-MC chapter) they are probably important in the story as a whole, Rome wasn't built in one day.
We haven't really heard a lot about the world yet, but I think the author has planned something big.
i love the story so keep on writing ok and hope your doing ok and be on good health when writing this and make sure you check when finish and check if it good or not and post it ok and thank you very much.
You should also make a spy network which is solely in control of king as there are many traitors or betrayers in the kingdom. In many cases, arms generals or nephews seize power and make the king a puppet ruler line fromn1542 to 1565 Rama raya made Sadasivam raya (the legal ruler) puppet ruler.
In Battle of Talikota, which had seemed an easy victory for the large Vijayanagar army, instead became a disaster as two Muslim commanders (Gilani brothers) of the Vijayanagara army betrayed and switched sides and turned their loyalty to the united Sultanates during critical point of battle.
I can see this novel growing much more in the future, it has a stupid amount of potential!
Hey the story didn't get dropped did it?? How come there aren't any chapters after 300?? I know sometimes there are slow downs when publishing chapters but its only day six of the month and I paid for top tier privilege so I kind of expect steady releases.
Aside from a few minor nitpicks, this is a very well-constructed story. I dig the premise and so have added this to my library. The first chapter drew me in like a prize tuna, and I can't wait for the payoff.
Applause! An inspired author with great imagination!
Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)
Wasn't this the same premise as the other scarecrow book last week?
Definitely not complaining though, always down for more protagonists being monsters
i do not know what happen. why this novel is beingvtaken down from trial read and till now i still do not get any refund from webnovel. the rating for this novel is 4.2 but being taken down and the choosen one is getting worse. some 3.6 or less than 4 rating being choosen. wow....