Heck yes, I am a hardcore Ml reader. This is honestly a great book in all, great grammar, hooking, and worth reading chapters. But one thing I would say that I am not a fan of is too much info dump?.
one word to describe this story"CRAP".....................................................................................................................................
The novel will release the fastest on Patreon and the next is this place, I will release the chapter two days faster than this place, but it may need you to pay for it. It was cheap and I think you will like the story.
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There should be a slapstick comedy tag added to this novel. The MC is dumb and I feel like my IQ has fallen after reading this. This is like Napoleon Dynamite, stupid humor. You'll either really like it or really hate it. I fall into the latter group. Napoleon Dynamite sucked.
Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).
This is a great book. Probably best described as a coming of age in a world of cultivation. The path of cultivation is reminiscent of doulou dalu but everything else is unique. Besides how many cultivation novels copy others qi system.A book with detailed characters and realistic interactions. At times it can seem a bit slow but if it was faster based it would lose a lot of the detail and quality that makes it such a good book.
I know I am late for the review, but I actually enjoyed reading it. So far, I could only read 3 chapters, but I really liked the plot. If this is your first book, then it is an good effort. The mc seems little twisted to me. But overall, everything is good.All the best Author
This is such a good novel. It's incredibly heart-warming, and the writing feels very melancholic. The MC has a system, but from the current chapters, it's much more focused on his relationship with his wife. There is no face slapping, no young masters, it's a slow paced story about a husband and wife. I hope this gets chosen.
I only read a little bit and it's not bad! It should be called "Doting Yandere Wife System" The MC that does not know what fear is, continuously is saved by the System, to calm down this scary wife. It's been a long while since I have seen a funny misunderstanding system. The wife is more of the main character because even the system is weaker here.BUT THIS MIGHT BE HAREM. I hate when Authors do things like this. It makes no sense to me, it was good as it is so why force it? Of course if by any chance I'm wrong please tell me... I just don't feel like wasting my time for another bad built-up relationships.
Cool read. Great worldbuilding elements going on. The concept and the fantasy like elements blend nicely with the cultural aspects of the novel. In addition, the characters names and overall profile matches the culture presented here. I myself am trying to get used to novels with characters that have Eastern names, but that doesn't affect the overall reading experience. Rather, I'm impressed with the overall writing the author has. Hopefully the author can finish the novel because I am intrigued how it will all end.
I wanted to like the book, but so far out of 16 chapters about 6 of them have been about him stealing from the kitchen