Bro this **** is soooooo gooood. I’m loving this ****. It may be the second prince of domination. One of my favourite novel. Keep up the work author and dont make The story go dark.
I need to talk about the atmosphere in these chapters because the author really knows how to paint a world. The opening scene at the Western-style house immediately sets the tone—Yan Zhao standing at the entrance, afraid to dirty the ground, half a step back before Gu Yu gently presses her shoulder and pulls her in. That single detail tells you everything about her life, her class, her entire history of feeling like she doesn't belong in spaces like this. The house itself is described as 'a small Western-style house' that wealthy people used to live in, later occupied by government officials. It's a symbol of a world Yan Zhao has only ever heard about in stories. Then you have the contrast of the privately-run dumpling restaurant—'brightly lit, with steam rising warmly inside'—which feels so intimate and real compared to the cold formality of the house. The streetlight scene outside the campus is cinematic: Gu Yu's profile 'sharply outlined by the streetlight's glow,' the other students whispering, the night breeze. And the final image of them walking back, the wind clearing their minds, Gu Yu casually mentioning 'They're not as good as the ones you make'—that's the kind of quiet, domestic moment that makes a story feel alive. Every scene serves the emotional arc. Nothing is wasted.
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I usually don't write reviews. But just copying someone's work isn't particularly a great Idea. It might lead to real issues if they catch you for plagiarism.
Interesting story and almost forgot to eat lunch ?but no problem. many things that make me curious and also make me want to learn more, although unfortunately I can't cry. ??but over all, good job. ??
A wonderful work right here. I love how it's in different pov so I can understand the characters in depth. Keep up your hard work author and I love Sebastian and Erika already
Not going to lie I wasn't expecting muchBut reading up to the chapter 5 Layla, I see you've done a good job depicting how a woman with no help or backing can be wound around.You did a good job with the dark settings and relationships between the character and I can only hope that your writing improves and grows as you go on.I'm looking forward to future chapters
Thanks for the update and for the record I have to go to the office and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA to get the plates and napkins and I will be there at baka bawal HAAHHAHA
So far as of chapter 13 the story seems quite interesting and I see a lot of potential in this story. However I do think the characters could use some more characterization
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Very entertaining haha, ancient friggen tittiesNow to pad this out a bit, it's hilarious you should just read it the main character is entertaining, the story is entertaining, overall its just entertaining