The only mistake of this work was not to continue............................................... Uma das melhores obras que já li ou conheci, pelo fato de ser quase exatamente a historia que eu sinto vontade de escrever, mas ainda tenho esperança de que algum dia continue.(PORTUGUESE)
Malgré des mise a jour en dent de scie, le héros est vraiment un mec lambda pas le mc nul qui devient super intelligent et sais quoi faire directement. C'EST TELLEMENT PLUS REALISTE c'est pourquoi je rehausse ma note d'une étoile en développement de perso
Ok, I'm not a fan of romance, so this will be an objective review.The quality of the writing is simple, neat, and easy to digest. There isn't much description but really it's not a bother. I actually like that, because I tend to imagine the scenes on my own. The stability of updates... well nothing to say about that really.Story development is cool. We start the book with SPOILER, the MC in a bed with his "wife" who is actually not really his wife. The author doesn't really linger on the useless and we dive rapidly into the nitty gritty. Character Design: As far as I have read, it's all good. Nothing out of place and they seem to have their own personalities. World Background: Humm I didn't read enough to really critic that. But from what I read it is developed and the author gave it some thoughts.All in all, it is a good novel. Just not in my genre. Keep up the good work! **: I've left you some paragraph comments. Be sure to check them all, since I point out some things you could improve in them.
Not bad it is well written and there is room for development with some creativity you should be able to get up and in no time
great Novel I recomend reading it, its literally funny and it would just make you laugh so much.... btw i tried the technique and damm it work, i got myself a date with an asian girl and i will literally do everything that i need to do to make this hot asian girl to be interested in me?
Barely made it through the first chapter. A boring slog with little to know worlduilding or meaningful story. So repetetive I felt like i was in a time loop.