The story have potential, great plot and well detailed description, but it would be much easier to read if you space the paragraphs. But it's a great story and I highly recommend.
Author is this Dropped? or is it on hiatus?
i loveto read very much❤️❤️❤️??????is there a part 2???❤️???????????????????
Past 50-60 chapters (~ch 70 to ~130) showed an issue: The author doesn't know how to make story arcs actually develop.Things happen, but nothing seems to have progressed. MC is in the same spot, except some inconsequential events happened (i.e. you could skip them, and the story would still be fine).Oh yeah, this author seems to have taken away the MC's ability to think for himself. Asking the guy in his ring about knowledge he doesn't know is one thing, having the MC ask the guy about decisions he should be making himself is another.
UNIQUE!!It is very rare to see a novel in this genre and with such an awesome story line is the rarest. The character design was at top notch and quite a number of uncommon elements like witches, sacrifices are used.If you are looking for an unique story, this book will surely keep you on hook.
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Surprised me by how good it is.
Will definitely keep reading it.
OMG IT'S UPDATING AGAIN OH MY GOODDDDD YIPPEEEE!!!I get to see Fina, Old Time Tea, Galaxy, Richard, Han Fei AND THE OTHER CHARACTERS I HAVE FORGOTTEN THE NAME OF WOW! I'm so happy I'm going to re-read this!!
Good book sir, this book looks like a diamond hidden in a mine. From the writing style, story development, world background, and updating stability is all good. I hope you'll continued writing this book.Good luck sir :3:v- SIENDONIA
It was an absolutely gut-wrenching story. Every twist hurt more than the last, and you won't really get HOW much it hurts till you read the ending chapter. Everything is miserable in the most well-written way and as a person who pretty much lives for angst, I live for this.Legitimately, I forgot that this app even existed till I remembered this book. Tbh the only reason I keep coming back to Webnovel is FOR this author's works. Thanks a lot for bringing us this masterpiece man. I'm not even going through the same thing as the MC is but it's still comforting somehow.Though the beginning parts might have been a bit cliche, I can't even imagine how it went from that point to where it is now. Man, I love this book
Looking at the reviews I am happy to see so many webnovel readers grow out of the harem trope. Perhaps the no harem sect will usher in a golden era on this god forbid site?