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Another interesting premise from one of my favourite authors. I love how you always seem to bring something new to the regular clichés you find in webnovel books. The first few chapters were great and I'll be looking forward to seeing where you take this story!
Hi Author,Was hoping you would be able to answer a couple of questions before I start this novel.1) Is this Novel ongoing or has it been dropped?2) Is the MC progressively look to better himself and get revenge on the individuals who have wronged him, or does he have the personality of a wooden spoon, who's only defining trait is watching his girlfriend with other men?Many thanks in advance, have a great day! :)
Not a fan of mind control. I was hoping for something new, but it's generic and an overused concept. Dropped. Not for me.............??????
I wanted to read more before leaving a review but... Fuck it. This novel is truly incredible, the writing style, the background and the fast paced action all adds to the quality. Give it a try, you'll love it.
peak nothing else it's peak, keep it up.
it's a nice all rounder good for a first chapter I can't wait for the second
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Mannn I remember when u made the original version and I enjoyed it… I just pray you don’t drop this novel too braGood luck to brevvv ??
I like the concept of this story, and think it is prity well written. Sometimes the mc takes a while to make choices I want her do make, but thats ok with me. Sometimes I don't agree with her choices, but thats more a preference thing then bad writing I think. What I don't like about this novel is based on my greed for more chapters???
Read up to 10 chapters. Not my type of novel ... So I'm gonna drop it but 5 stars cos Author seems to be know his stuff.....
what a great start, looking forward to see how the story unfold. keep it up!