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hi guys this is shameless review from author, please help to review, whether is good or bad, I write this story with my heart, and sometimes tears, is too good for me, I hope you guys like it, love ?????
Hi dear readers, it's the author here. Finally able to give my novel a review after reaching a 100 chapters .Now we're moving forward to volume 2 which I've already given a warning as it would contain lots of adult content. Belmont is a mixed school once again so of course .. .Lots of 18+ scenes GoreMurder cases .I also want to tell you readers that English isn't my first language so for any errors you might have come across , kindly point it out and the correction would be made. I also want you all to drop reviews of how you've seen the novel so far. Constructive ones please so as to make necessary adjustments . Thanks for all your support and understanding.
hey sister nice work I appreciate it and congrats you to welcome a great novel in the web novel Praise the work and I pray to the God that you would get succeed in it this work maintain the hard work
This is a really interesting story so far! I like the similarities between Ryuu and the MC before he fell into the "rabbit hole" (they both have a little sister that worries about them ^~^)! The writing is phenomenal, there wasn't any grammar mistakes at all! The writing and story flows very smoothly, and the pace is really nice~ I like that it's in 1st POV, something I haven't encountered before in WN c:The update stability is also really nice, it seems to be updated every 1-2 days which is awesome, especially for a new book! Very interesting story that people should check out if they like the science fiction genre~ Hoping for the best!
after I finished the untamed 6 times I watched anime version but still can't get enough of them so finally decided to read it and it doesn't disappoint me
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Overall, the story is fantastic. However, some areas could be improved in terms of grammar. That aside, this story is rather engaging and well written.
Overall, love the idea but room for improvement.Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding.Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21
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Great book.... needed alot of work. Want to see more chapters updated. How in ghe witkkffsdvfdhgssdga aetynbc f yjbvf tyujnnhuyiuyijhhhjkjhggferyytefuikjhgvsawryuknbcfyh
