Lovely story. The mystery in it makes the story really interesting. Your character formation and use of words is good. I honestly can't wait to see how it ends, Wonderful job, well done.
What? Waited whole week for new realese of books. All we got was 4 new ones instead of the standard 6-8 can't they put in the old ones that wasn't chosen then?
I wanna like this story but there is next to no story development and frankly there is not a single character that I genuinely like, just ones I dont hate... or well, really hate. I definitely wanna mention that it's fine to have a main character start out weak, but it's extremely frustrating to read a story in which the character is set up to fail and be made a mockery of around every corner no matter what he does. This was especially unfortunate at one point where th mc used his brain to set up a trap just to fail at the last second for a totally avoidable reason that came out of nowhere. In 80 chapters we got one sneak peak into what's special about him and will presumably help him become strong at some point, but even then the focus was much more on how that ability is limited instead of how the mc will build up on that ability. Which I feel is just not enough to balance out the frustration that builds up while reading.Now at the end I wanna say that I do feel like the author is improving and the story might very well get more engaging at a later point but you might wanna start reading from chapter 50 like suggested because before that point it is genuinely jarring to read, not because of grammar or anything but because of the above mentioned reasons.
hey author, can you check out my version of your story? I have continue the Liberation War with more battles and gaining a lot more fans into this franchise.
i love the story so far and i wait in anticipation for the next chapters ................... im not much of a writer so why do we have to write such a long review
The synopsis is something that a 7th grader would come up with. "In turn this led to" my ass. Seriously, the sypnosis is incredibly vague and lacking in substance. Frankly put, it is quite appalling for it's lack of charisma and word choice. If the translation or base material is at this level, then I don't hold much hope for this novel at all.
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Its a good book I like how the characters ability and the fact he doesn't hide his cultivation. But the fact that it took 4 chapter from 13 to 16 to just re describe everything that just happened all over again make me want to
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