Basically it has different plot, character,and world but have the same guidelines as Advent of an Archmage. The story itself are okay but sometime very awkward to read.
its very good kept me interested well developed plots and ideas.
I'm so very upset with the ending SERIOUSLY who ends it with him about to enter planet hope, it doesn't continue? He still needs to make a base, obtain the peak of cultivation, guide his sister from time to time in the virtual worlds final conquest decide truly what to do AS A EMPEROR with the other women who wanna get them some, what happens with the artificial humans and gaia, finally the COMPLETE conquest of the planet with other human factions once more contending this time with actual death and consequences.
The world building is trash and unbearable to read past the first 10 chapters.aaahshsysysysusododhdhfufifufyrurieoejeheueieieieueueiekekekelekdkhfhfufifi
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This novel takes quite an interesting take on the cultivation world, with there being and organisation to manage cultivators and the complicated relationship between the organisation and the sects/families.The cases that were presented atleast in the free chapters were quite different from each othere represting the range this novel may offer. The plot of the cases seem interesting and the analysis and evaluation at the end of the first case was just awesome. And not all cases seem to be deep and schematic, some were just simple misunderstanding and a little funny, which provided a bit of comic relief.The main character and the supporting characters are defined well enough that it wouldn't be hard to enjoy them apart from each other. MC is quite an oddball though, more in a funny way and surprisingly enough very stern when needed whithout it being an out of character thing for him.I really would suggest reading till the end of the first case, and his evaluations. After that you can decide whether to continue. I don't usually write reviews but it seemed like a good novel and lacked reviews, so here I am.And yeah, the writing was quite detailed and grammar... everything written by a human seems heavenly to me after geeting deep into mtl and raws so idk about that. That's all. Have a nice day.
The system idea in this novel is very cool and doesn’t seem too op at first. But it is op. But the character designs here what sucks.. the descriptions are just “she is pretty” and “nation toppling beauty” pretty vague. And the male descriptions er pretty nonexistent.And this part is a personal pet peeve of mine but the females in this story are seemingly lambs up for slaughter and are suppressed in a man world. I would accept that **** if women just suck at fighting and cultivation but all women can cultivate perfectly well, bothers me that these chicks are just eye candy that can’t do jack **** themselves. Just seems as if the author is sexist or simply sucks at writing strong female characters. Then my second pet peeve, the mc’s whole revenge plot against the empress is fine but his grudge against his father is sooooooooooo forced. Than there is the mc’s step sister/future wife - I hate this bîtch. She is sooooooooooo useless and ultimately just gets all the trash items that the system pōops out. She does absolutely nothing to the plot! And the reason why I still read this novel after all that, is because I think this system is a cool and seemingly a new idea/concept from regular systems in other novels. And also the translators have done a great job with this not gonna lie.
After reading until chapter 31, the story so far is good. It has a unique flavor and a unique interaction between the characters. MC of this novel is mature and thinking according to the information he had at that moment, which makes me doubt his identity when he was on Earth. I'm hoping to know more about his past. At the same time, he can be funny by using his knowledge of the novels he had read before to insert into the situation he was in. At this point alone, I would give it 10/10.The other side characters are all great. They have their own personalities, more realistic compared to other novels that I had read before. I can't get enough of Yun Qianxue's overprotectiveness and Yun Huanxin's Gilgamesh-esque ability. Not to mention the mysterious assassin-like Yun Meilan, she is by far, attracting me the most because I like the assassin-type character.The world-building is rich. It looks simple but it filled with mysterious and the author did a great job by revealing it bit by bit. The narration in this novel is great. Sometimes, it makes me thought I am reading a translated novel instead of an original novel.There is surely a grammar quirk but is not that annoying. I am not a native English speaker and I find the grammar in this novel is good without disturbing my reading experience.Lastly, I wish the author could release more per day because I can't get enough of it.
Drop.this will be the same as any other novel, Marco will help Jessica and will take supplies and then there is a group of people who enter the building and bring Jessica and food supplies, then Marco feels cheated and decides to take revenge
I really thought that as the story progressed the MC would make some better decisions or maybe abandon them, but it didn't stay that simple.
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Hey, there. I'm the guy who's translating the work with the help of the editor. First, thank you for all readers' support. Will humbly accept all the criticisms or suggestions. I will be more careful with the translation quality and try my best to make it easily understandable to most readers. Hope you can enjoy the travel of cuisines.