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Writing Quality is great, there are little to no errors, smooth sentences.Stability of Updates is good, I guess. Since it currently only have 3 Chapters, I can't really say.Story Development is really unique, there are some words I couldn't recognize, and the pace is good. Character Design is also good, a bit unique. Their description is also good. World Background is great so no complaints there.
Storys pretty awesome and interesting....suggestion: dont make this a cliche type BS story where MC starts building his own faction..make him like a unique loner type MC..with him only turning his lovers into vampires....maybe add world travel and if you are doing romance dont make it stupid and slutty but a proper romantic development...and if harem max 3-5....also an OP MC ..keep him like that like i mean just physically you can see that this can easily kill every character in HP.... Anyway these are just suggestions..you do you..good luck and good show.
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This is a really interesting plot. I can't imagine the time and effort it took to create this word and every single detail. I'm amazed by what I read so far. It was interesting to see Aito handle what was thrown his way.Wishing you success with this book!
Very interesting am at 18 chapter Only inconsistency is how does the ball understand the concept of normality.
Like the fact that the mc is op in the real world. The beginning is different from the usual mmo novels since he had the money and from this fact it can take some time before he comes in to conflict with other clans .
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Vocabulary is terrible and the writing is elementary. Just about every chapter the mc say "WHAAT" or such. Mc is only child that doesn't have a magic core which makes him useless but his grandfather doesn't give up on him and continues to train him in willpower pretty much to use him as an experiment. Kid trains it up unlocks awesome power yadda yadda. If the grammar was better the story would be better but I catch myself just scanning the chapters. Would not recommend it unless you can find absolutely nothing that interests you.
story is in the hiatus or something ? . already had 3 weeks . waiting for realese :) thanks .....................................................................................................................................
It has a nice story and the plot is ok but the romance is totally trashy before you read this novel ask yourself if you like seeing the Mc being continously bullyed bruised and battered by a girl if yes then continue running me am done with it. The other characters see it as nothing and even make jokes about the Mc being continously beaten up by a girl during forced trained till he gets broken bones and bruises. They are been called a couple the Mc denies she is his gf but still sends her letters and spends more time with her