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Excited for more. Very well thought out, and exceptional attention to detail. I find myself continuously appreciating the small side nods to other characters and how they may eventually interact with the plot.
its annoying when he knows the value of this food product but sells at a lower price. your target market are those people with magic because they can recover fast like an artifact right? then dont be lower your price. its like an insult to your produce when they offer more than ordinary food but the price is low and you need to upgrade most. as you said everything is secondary you need to upgrade your system but whats this? are being dumb? its annoying to read. its not because he is kind to commoners but the quality of a product should be the same for the price. dumb. i hope you dont update anymore. your storyline is so awesome with the system and the recipes but it all went down when you decided to insult your won food produce. you are being foolish. it would be less annoying if yes you sell your food at a cheap price but DONT make it a goal to upgrade your system alongside with it. you are making a fool out of yourself. the money is not that problematic for you because you are rich. if you made the storyline like that you wont make your mc look foolish by a having a brain but not using it. do me a favor and dont update anymore, the book doesnt look favorable at all.
the grammar is a mess, there's a lot of mistakes and some parts doesn't make sense, but if you disregard those, then you can enjoy reading this novel just fine i guess.
very well written novel with well done story ,the characters are decently done, the world building is phenomenal specially how the author connected his other 2 stories to this one building a interactive Universe so I loved this aspect hope that the author keeps up the good work
Ch 1-107 :- Translation: 9/10- Editing: 9/10Ch 108-* :- Translation: 5/10- Editing: -3/10 (min 3)a b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z
The story gets very repetitive very early on.
Story just contradicts itself every other paragraph,one chapter his control has increased . next chapter his control has fallenone chapter his Qi is pure . next chapter it's muddy .one chapter he wants to do X . next chapter doing X is just out of the question .one chapter he gets an inheritance . next chapter it's too bothersome to actually read it .
uhh is this even allowed? is it the same people who already translate the one you can read free, or is it someone who just going to copy and paste from a website that's translating this and post it on here?
Does anyone know anything about this pause? It's been 12 days without updating, does the author have any social network where he keeps his readers informed?
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I do enjoy the novel but the update stability is so slow.
Very interesting story with a good plot. Every chapter is detailed and well written and explained. ?Author done an amazing by writing such an amazing story. If I could give you 10 stars, I would. ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
