As a fellow Nigerian, am supposed to rate the story well, abi??Ok to get to the matter Here's me being hones: This novel is absolutely wonderful.Both the characters and the story line everything is amazing.But I have one tiny problem with itThe MC.Aaron Wade as an MC is too...weak for me and I don't mean physically.To the point I've rea, he allows people to walk over him too muchHe doesn't act like the dark prince he is and he is way too infatuated with that Kira girl.I'd love the author to make the MC a bit more strong willedMm, I think that's all , .
Well played out world setup with a great character setup for each individual. This is the first story I can remember the names of each character introduced in the early chapters past chapter 100. Thank you so much author for the easy to follow story!
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
The character design of Lucifer is an exceptional view in my perspective as I enjoy his indulging actions. The novel is a good one if I say so.
one of the best novels that i ever read ... Almost everything is perfect ?? ... I hope this novel become official in Webnovel !!!! ..... Great author god bless you ?
Started reading this on royal road and got hooked. Everything about this story for me is top notch with different and interesting ideas. Also the book is not too slow paced or fast paced and is at a great valence. The Grammer is amazing compared to all the other original webnovals that I've read so far on this site and I can't help but wonder why the hell this isn't rank 1. Gonna stay with this story for as long as I can and anticipate every chapter. I also can't help but love your work ethic when it comes to this Novel. The love you yourself seem to have for this story really shows in your writing. This has also inspired me to start writing story's. I respect you and thank you for this and my future doses of CEDS
the storyline was eye catching and the grammar was goodand most important was each chapter was extremely long... which sometimes makes me lazy to read but a great novel
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Can only be said to be decent. It’s not good nor bad. It’s a system and eastern fantasy novel with a couple twists. It’s enjoyable to read and grammar is nice. However there are a couple bad character designs. Firstly, MC reincarnates and inherits a system. This system makes it so that he can exchange points for op items. The former soul had 9 disciples which were all evil since the former soul was evil as well. There are a couple plot holes in the story. For example, MC reincarnates as an evil person who had an extremely powerful soul and lived over 900 years. MC himself has lived for less than 30 years I’m assuming and has a weak soul. Apparently he inherits all the 900 years of memories and still stays the same? This doesn’t make sense at all. He should have had an extreme personality change at least but probably still should’ve lost his mind and started believing that he was the previous soul. After all, 900 years of life is a lot more than 30 years. He shouldn’t have been able to stay the same because he was just a mortal in his previous life, he didn’t have a powerful soul nor mind. He didn’t even have plot armor at this point. I’m guessing the author just forgot about this. Anyways, the next plot hole is that he doesn’t stay evil. He changes to good. This is really a major plot change since I personally came to read about an evil villain trying to control his disciples. I didn’t come here to see a goody-goody hero MC change his evil personality to good and also make his evil disciples into righteous disciples. The title and synopsis are very misleading in this case. It should be called, “My Good Disciples.” The synopsis should’ve stated all of this and I blame the translator/ author. Anyways, this really doesn’t make sense since the system is also a good system. The previous dude was evil but had a good system? This is a big plot hole. I don’t really like this novel because of how misleading it was. I read the title and synopsis and thought to myself how awesome this novel could be. I couldn’t wait to read about an evil MC who lost all his power try to control his evil disciples who would kill him if they knew he lost his powers. The system was kind of weird and random as it didn’t really fit in. I didn’t see the purpose of a system but I thought that it might be there to help the MC to gain his power and also to help make some arcs. But I was disappointed very quickly. The ‘evil’ Mc is actually a good hero. The evil disciples are actually becoming good disciples because of the MC. The system is a good system and it’s giving the evil MC missions to change to a good MC. This was really disappointing. The entire synopsis and title was completely wrong. Also I’m really sorry author but this plot sucks. I doubt you could keep this story going for longer than 200 chapters. If you do keep it going for longer, the quality will drop by so much that it will be able to cause a coma by reading it. If you make the MC progress to slow, the quality will drop by chapter 100. If you make him go at a medium speed, the quality will drop by chapter 175. If you make the MC go fast, the quality will drop by chapter 70. I wish you luck author. My advice is to make him go at medium speed and write maybe 200 chapters. I get that you’re being different but this really isn’t how you do it. You were supposed to get rid of the system. Keep the MC’s evilness. The plot should be that the MC is supposed to climb his way back up to the peak while keeping his disciples under check. It should’ve been like those reincarnated god novels where the MC reincarnates and has to start from scratch. However the disciples and evil mind personality would have given them a unique read. If you had done this, you would have been able to write 500 chapters of decent quality or either 300 chapters of excellent quality. Now that you’ve screwed the plot by making it a goody-goody MC, you can at best write 500 chapters of garbage quality or 200 chapters of decent quality.
East Taiwan numbawan(snake country)only they r the true humans rest of the humans are not hence they should not be considered as fellow humans East Taiwan numbawan they will rule the world it's our honor to serve the true humans?????*being sarcastic
I super duper loooooooooooooved it?? plsss update soon!!!!! Joined the discord but still don't know how to use it since its not popular in my country ??? can you plss help me out
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