DeathMonarch1
I consider myself as part of the story, although I only lurk around the chat room most of the time and laugh at some of the discussions. I sometimes want to jump in, but then my boss would ping me to make an update on my work hahaha. Nice work!
This is an amazing story , whether it is the story or the characters or just how dark it is sometimes is a pure bliss to read. I wish the author doesn't drop this novel and wish there were more novels like this. Lesssgooooo
absolutely emaculate it astonishing how amazing this story is in my opinion one of the best story I've seen so far and other than a few and minor Grammer mistakes I would say this is a great story well worth the read
Will be there spoilers because I just started book 2 ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
ha i have found you after a month of silence on royal road you have run here then have the audacity to release the the chapters here slowly were watching nimero were watching
The character development is really good for the ones that were introduced so far. The story as a hole has a nica fresh feeling of something new that wasn't poorly executed. I can also appreciate a content creator who is not afraid to develop the story as a hole the way he envisioned instead of following the common consensus that the story should be PG, especially in this case where the hole premise is for a more mature audience.
I enjoy the story for what it is. It's not the best spelling and sentence structure but the Author is not a native English speaker so it's forgiven that the language is substandard. I enjoy that the story is more laid back and that overall it's more enjoyable and I bet after some time the grammar and structure will improve after all practice makes perfect. I recommend this to people who can understand what the author is trying to convey and maybe help out with positive comments and tips.
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So far this seems like model world creator or whatever that one's called, however I'm still enjoying this so far. No grammar mistakes I spotted, but I don't care for those. I just want him to not Instantly become friends with everyone now that his power is good. Everyone laughed at him and personally I dislike the MC going straight back to them when he gets power... in my opinion he should teach em a lesson or something... Just a thought, thanks again.
Read all the way up to the latest chapter (ch153) the storyline and plot is amazing with very high attention to detail, the more you read the more captivated you will be by the storyline. Pace is very good, not to fast or slow and all timeskips are well explained. No feeling of a gap. The mc isnt overpowered, and his abilities are explained very well. Just uploading speed isnt very stable. Not much a flaw just not good for the people whole can binge read a lot and fast in one sitting. Very glad there is no romance (a lot of stories who have romance or add romance have to much focus or it when it wasnt the main plot/theme - hope the author wont add romance or harem)
The novels protagonist isn't likable from the start which isn't a good sighn even if the story is good later on a unlikable mc that leaves a bad taste in your mouth is quite a red flag for me sorry qidian has picked quite uninteresting novels atleast for me if you guys like it great for you just not my cup of tea
Wtf. Why is this novel here again?☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁☁☁☁????☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁☁?☁☁?☁?☁
