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it's an invincible flow novel that makes everyone braindead only to just barely not sometimes and then immediately walk it back with unnecessary nationalism.The numbers never make sense and then fall to extremes. The mechanic are incredibly soft with no proper sense of scale.Character interactions are at a death and the plot armor is thick as the plot contrivance. mc gets a god slaying Uber skill early on with a downside and then myriad ways to circumvent it. also gets marked by evil god, gets rid of mark but still somehow gets targeted from another planet. it's just exhausting.
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For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem* Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.
Loved the characters model and the world background is interesting.....and minimum grammatical errors, that's what I like and the silent kid Arthur Is good addition.I like it.
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5/5 (๑ↀᆺↀ๑)✧What a masterpiece!!! (*Φ皿Φ*)The author's creativity is very well portrayed in this book! (=ΦÅΦ=)Well-written, with good descriptions and awesome lead character! ٩(ↀДↀ)۶I am so glad I came across it! ฅ(*ΦωΦ*) ฅ
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Summary: BromanceNot for the fainthearted.Mc had 5 years of fun time foxy...........................................................................
I saw this novel on my recommended and I was pleasantly interested in the synopsis and I thought I would try it out.For some reason however there was a huge disconnect when I tried to read the first few chapters of the story. The first chapter was jarring enough with no background or context given for any of world or charecters but the second chapter seemed to skip a whole portion of the story and made me think I had missed a chapter.I would personally not recommend this novel but I still wish the author well and I hope others can get some enjoyment out of the author’s writing.
I don’t know why there’s so many complaints about errors. Web Novels are meant to be more or less rough drafts to begin with so there will be mistakes.That being said, I dropped this in Chapter 6 since I found the System-MC to be insufferably stupid and unnecessarily edgy. The most annoying part is the novel constantly calls the MC a mega-genius only for him to show no capability of complex thought moments later. Just saying a character is smart doesn’t make them smart…
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