I really like this story. Yeah, maybe I shouldn't say so, because the stories that I like haven't been doing too well lately. Anyway. The Protagonist—Parr Skystar—has a magic short sword. Every time that he kills something, he absorbs life-force directly through the sword, allowing him to level up rapidly. Yeah, I don't know if it is just me, but the parts where the Protagonist levels up are my favorite parts of the story. Of course, you can't have a cake of nothing but icing—well, you can, but then it isn't cake—just candy. The level ups are fast, but not monotonous—and since he has to chose WHICH ability to level up, that also adds some texture. I REALLY HOPE this story gets picked!
First of, great imagination and blend of soo much.But the problem is that the the VRMO actually feels like a drag instead of interesting. It feels pretty forced and boring. Amazing ideas, hats off for that . Also for some reason the whole world seems very forced and artificial. I think that is because you tried too many things and don’t have experience in properly connecting all of it. The flow is kinda missing like how it was done in ROTWRTW(not on webnovel)
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1st thing that come to mind is : inconsistency-his strange should be boss level but after sometime you will think its not that gréât-too much weird stuff like =SPOILERS=the match against à lord monster where mc is supposedly the "only hope" ..... turns out there are lot of platinum or even Diamond rank adventurer so why the match ?? -the damage ....they are all over the place sometime 1 attack plunder half his life but it considered litle.... sometime 1/10 of his life and its considered à lot....- the nerfing is clearly one of the thing i hâte and the "class change" is clearly à soft nerf qince the class doesnt change .... stat doesnt change ... after the 1st change you think that he will have exclusive skill each change but not on his second one.....
Not a primordial cultivator. Instead a poor cultivator. Beta mc.. Get blushed.. Instead of cultivating he does bootlickin to climb up. I dropped it coz.. I can't handle the elder jing personality.. To get a girl he will become servant.. Ugh.... Gets trolled by others here and there.. Poor romance.
Just want to say author has a beautiful imagination.Cool MCI like how MC is lazy and indiferent but also intelligent and mature.Very captivating scenes.5 star character designMost likeable book Ive found in a while.
Well I can finally say that this novel is just like the other 100 or so Chinese novels out there on this site right now, I started reading this because a review said that the characters had purpose, that the antagonists had character and that the MC solved problems through intellect and didn't needlessly kill, but as of this chapter I can safely say that none of these things are true. The main character has received a grand total of 5 deus ex machinas and 7 random coincidences already in the FIRST 21 Chapters. He retardedly killed 3 people related to the CROWN PRINCE, and he is the exact opposite of intelligent by not realizing how rare things from a higher dimension are to mortal people. Not only that he has coincidenced upon 4 "insanely powerful relics" that can boost cultivation in the first 21 chapters. A story is that has no ******* because the author will just drop free stuff in the MC's lap is not a good story.
Very well thaught out, the ***** scenes are not the plot but are part of the development. Battle and character development are well paced and placed. Keep it up! ?
trash........too many loop hole.. now writings a novel is like playing .......................................................................
The quality of the translation has dropped with the new translator. Hopefully it gets better with more character naming stability...like seriously!!! What the hell is a Callastan?!!
can't even begin to explain lost interest after the first 5 chapters can't have male pets due to them being too handsome only female pets like the Arthur is a horn teen
the start feels like a ripoff of The Disastrous Life of Saiki-kun. anime could be a fan fiction as i am assuming positive intent........................................................................................................................................will probably change score later if it gets more original......................................................................................