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It's excellent ?. But it hardly feels like a fanfic of Naruto. But if tou consider it as an individual novel, then it's good. Characters are very realistic, but these counterparts don't match the OG characters in Naruto. At least, the ones who interacted with Main Leads. Their names are also strange as they possessed bodies which already have had their identities. So shouldn't their name be Japanese or at least resemble Japanese instead of American? While the story isn't very fast paced, but MLs are getting stronger at alarming speed. And for some reason, ML Otsutsuki clan is Konohagakure. Shouldn't he be in space with Toneri or even at the Otsutsuki clan? And how is he learning jutsus? Why is like a complete normal shinobi? And Otsutsuki's should look different from humans, so why isn't he questioned? And seeing a Jesus follower, especially in Naruto anime seems really odd. Well, it's not Naruto anime. In the starting, the antagonist I will say, explained that it's a world similar to Naruto, but not Naruto. So all my previous points are invalid. But I just wanted to share my thoughts. I hope you enjoy this novel further and it does well in the future.
In my new work on the pursuit of immortality by the main character, to the extent of venturing and investing in space exploration, when compared to other humans, what he lacks the most is not time. Please readers bear with any issues that might be related to word quality. Try my best, and please support this novel!
Hello great author, I'm a huge fan of your work! Your book left a lasting impression on me, and I believe it has the potential to reach even more readers. I'd be honored to share some thoughts on how to enhance its impact and visibility. Would you be open to hearing my thoughts?
Well first off the explaination of the world background needs to be addressed, and i’d like it if you gave more detail into how characters, backgrounds and objects looked but other than that the writing is pretty great and you update quite consistently ffrom what I can see. So just keep going
I really enjoyed this story, from the narration to the plot I thought it was put together quite well. I personally felt it was a little too short for me to invest in any of the characters though, since it just takes a while for me to attach emotionally to a fictional character in general. (especially if it's set up to look like that i.e. a dystopian/thriller) The writing was good, granted a couple of typos and other minor things that can be a pain to edit with so many words coming into play. Overall I enjoyed this story and the setting it takes place in. There was one thing that stood out to me though, and that was Ace. He is such a baby personality and I love him with all my heart. We honestly need more screentime for him along with a more in-depth description of what he looks like and a back story.
A horrifying and nightmarish world that feels like a fever dream. Finding the mc in an ocean alone and in a small space against the unknown of the vast abyss. make you sweat while reading.
I can’t really say it is a bad book but the prose is horrible.Many sentences are useless and serve no purpose whats so ever,For example it is once stated that the house is dark because there were no lights and the night was dark, I mean no **** Sherlock.
Great novel! I am really enjoying it so far. I personally am a fan of OP MC’s and this is great. I hope the translator can continue posting this story.
Wonderfully worded, beautifully told and completely exhilarating. The author is doing a fantastic job telling this story. Every word describes what is happening so purely, so beautiful that it’s easy to envision. The author is giving the readers something to see and feel. Not just read. Read it!Dear author, I have a question for you. If you don’t mind. ?
Love you author please don't drop it And make the mc G O A T