I thibk the concept is amazing.I Have a very high hope for this story and the mc.Go go go I want more chapter of this book ^^!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really loving what I've read so far. Especially love the character interactions and story building, can't wait to see where it'll go from here! Keep it up!
I like the novel, but the language I speak is Spanish, so I wanted to pay for Webnovel to continue with the story, but I can't translate it into Spanish. It's a shame, I really wanted to read the story. Don't you have a Patreon?"
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To be honest ill be rating this work for various reasons . The first being that this is the Author's first book and yet the story is solid and i didn't find any loopholes till now.The english is decent and not many grammar mistakes exist which really shows how much thought and hard work the author is putting into this novel and he doesnt even have an editor and he isnt even contracted yet.The last point is that this story isnt predictable at all .Keep up the good work and ill be following this work when it gets more chapters.
C67 [First Arc for me]Pros- comedy is on MAX- good writen-detailed system -not op mc (so far)Cons-Too much comedy on some places (in early chapters)-Slow temp of story (so far)-Short Chapters-Close to 0 Character Design (so far)
The FitnessGram PACER Test is a multistage aerobic capacity test that progressively gets more difficult as it continues.The test is used to measure a student's aerobic capacity as part of the FitnessGram assessment. Students run back and forth as many times as they can, each lap signaled by a beep sound. The test get progressively faster as it continues until the student reaches their max lap score.The PACER Test score is combined in the FitnessGram software with scores for muscular strength, endurance, flexibility and body composition to determine whether a student is in the Healthy Fitness Zone™ or the Needs Improvement Zone™.So this is a good story :)
I can honestly say that this has to be, if not my favorite mmorpg based story that I've read. Overall, the main character is great, not many grammar mistakes, and is just a great story I've truly enjoyed. I finished what's been added so far, and I'm looking forward to future chapters. Keep up the great work!
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plot gets more and more exciting as story advances! highly recommend.........................................................................................................................................