This is a really interesting sci-fi story with great characters in a world unlike any I've read before. I am intrigued and can't wait to read more!
Just another shameless Author rating their book 5 stars. it's my first public work. I know it isn't the best, but I hope that it will get better as my experience and confidence grows!
The story is more of a script, not that it's a bad thing. The story is actually pretty interesting so far for only being 4 chapters out.
I love how it started with the other side characters views of the MC before diving in. It allows you to already see her personality before we actually meet her.
I gave 4.8, only because the world background I understood was modernized, but it didn't go into depth much. Again, not that it's a bad thing, it allows reader to use their imagination.
I look forward to reading more! Keep it up author!
I like how the author manage the flow of the chapters. Nicely work keep writing stories I'll root for youuuuu good luck love your story keep it up [img=recommend]
Interesting work. Very unfortunate that the grammar is average, but nonetheless I will watch this book with great interest.
Really an awesome work, the concept and plot is really good. The hype is maintained from the very beginning as the author introduced the 5 demon Kings. And, i think author is aware of his grammatical errors and is trying to improve them so i don't have to say much in that topic. But, overall i found this novel really enjoyable. Highly recommend.
is the story really completed like it says above? I read the last chapter above, and it doesn't feel completed, just says end of volume 1... Are other volumes going to be published as different books?
The story is interesting. The author did a good job. Keep up the good work and please continue releasing more chapters for us. I totally recommend this novel, it's great!
After I finished reading the available chapters, I thought about the various aspects of the story such as characters and their interactions, the system and how it works with the MC, the events that occur, ect... I find that the story is rather bland. It is obviously written by someone who has some knowledge about the medical field, or even a lot of knowledge, but the story just does not excite me. Maybe it gets better, and I can only hope so, but it is not enough as is for me to recommend it.
Overall a very enjoyable plot and idea. It feels like a very free RPG and I like the idea of that. I can envision the world well and the story progresses at a reasonable pace.The writing can be a bit sloppy at times, but I think the other aspects makes up for it.
Dude its so good, like i have never i mean never read a mafia type fighting nove ………. The character development was on point, i mean seeing mayr go from school kid to taking on mafia boss was exhilaratingHope the updates are frequent
Its nice and all with an op hero but you should make his goals clear or at least make it so that he will have his hard moments with an exciting fight once every few dozens of chapters because everybody knows human character is shaped through hardships and pain