SandKastle
What is your reason for constantly choosing 100x books, it's ridiculously boring..
After the first 10 chapters of the book, the main character is already a chapter ending boss.
i don’t know what happen but i never see new chapter for this novel and i keep wait for days or weeks now and still non hope this will not be the like the others that stop on midways
Hello author, hope you had a good day (or night) depends. So I have seen your work, today I will review your novel and I think you are doing fine with your narrations. I can still see that it can be improved. The narrations were direct and concise. It was a nice story all in all and Such cuddly and heart pumping in some places. What a beautiful novel you have. I think I have to read more as I am just on the tip of the iceberg. Making me see just a shallow part of it. But so far, I can see its potential. Good luck in the Spirity! Hope you win! Have a five star to brighten you up. ✨
I dont get why he is jealous. He got her through college working 3 jobs. Shes successful because of you, those would be OUR accomplishments. Also if she can afford to pay for the 2 of them why doesn't he start bettering himself, like looking for a good job or studying? I think what makes this disappointing is he just gets thrown a system even though he and his sister are in such a good situation now. It'd be more interesting is if the way he got his sister through college was because he was a crime lord and then she somehow found out.
Honestly, the translation is questionable, the names are butchered, but that's the best part of this trash, there's no redeeming qualities of this, i mean literally none.
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21 chapters read, overall good story, translation quality (3) is good as in grammar, but five great families of us not a thing (can be waved off as part of the fiction world), repeats already proven statements (might be an emphasize, but it gives more of a repetition effect then emphasize), and some other stuff.
Good plot, nice system though ‘divine’ skills, not all deserve the title divine, but still good.
Good story development (5).
Background (4) build-up is good-ish.
Updating stability(5)-probably will stay at 40 for long time thou
Characters (4)-Nice backgrounds for some
Enjoyed reading :)
(+1 in translation quality)
Generic, no thing new nor creative. It was kinda boring for me. The only people who will like it are the people who are so obsessed with Pokemon and taming monsters
Raw name: 夜的命名术
This novel is very good in the beginning but after after some chapters the authors will go super racist. All "Evil" Americans, "Despicable and atrocious" Japanese government along with a few other villain countries will collude with the enemies of our world and try to cause problems to China. The "righteous" Chinese government (
Author is mad racist
This is an simp, just trying to rate the book and I think the book is a good read, also I am going to edit the first few chapters on Sunday, there will be the last chapter of week today or tomorrow but there will be no bonus chapter.
Ohh!Man this novel is full of action scenes
In first chapter when I was reading there was sentence where it was written something like he was searching for someone who is special for him
I thought that that person was girl but that special person was his brother.. Lol!
