SandKastle
Some good stuff, keep up the great work
Love it Like it please dont drop it
i mess with this heavy i hope that the author still post more chapters........................ ...................................................................................................................
This novel is the same as mc in most of the novels. He is stupid, naive, he does not like to kill for profit, mc does not use his brain and does not think ahead, mc has good intentions like the MCs in the other novel. His mentality sends himself to death. If mc was evil mc, this novel would be read.
Mr Valmon Dain as a scientist, invented a machine which will be able to track voices communication over phones and using the means to report criminal act to the police but now he was In situation whereby the latest intimation no 34 he reported, the leader of the silver Arrow group happens to be her girlfriend's dad. Now watch out for what is going to happen next.
Hi! I'm the author of this story.
First, Welcome all readers to the world of Undisclosure.
The scifi/fantasy series consists of 4 books and I have finished all in my mother language so don't be scared if I will drop because it's not gonna happen. The English version is on process. I try translating at my best.
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Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.
Is this book already dropped or are you gonna update it after some time...
can't wait to read more it is somewhat new concept [img=gift]
Honestly I’m just here to see if this is really just stuff that happened after crazy necromancer.
Chapters 12 onwards have been driving me to read this novel from time to time. Thank you very much Oscar for the great work done. I hope other people are not missing the drama. Indeed, it is really realistic. Psychological problems can make people develop very rare behaviors as it manifests among the couple in chapter 12.
Unquestionable attitude toward brother turns out to be a prayer for help from him. I like this interesting piece of work. I need more really.
This is interesting! Because of the writing style I felt it light and was able to read easily and steadily which added more points to the story! It also consists of interesting twist! Though to be honest, though it's just my opinion, I would like to make the writing style more vivid and descriptive. That's just my opinion though but the writing style is already fine because it fits with the storyline
Usurper of Totality definitely isn't like anything else I've seen hanging around WebNovel—if you're tired of OP reincarnators or paper-thin "edgy" characters, this will be sweet relief! The author has an amazing handle on comedy, particularly bro/male camaraderie, but also an excellent poetic style when you really need it. Clearly a lot of effort has been put into the world-building, but UoT is really just *enjoyable* to read thanks to the banter and screw-ball humor.Highly recommended!
