TomzyGabs19
Hey you thought you were talented with your rank 5 martial spirit? Well I have a rank 6 one so your trash compared to me. Then suddenly a young master with a rank 7 spirit comes by in his carriage and says, men kill these pieces of trash for blocking my way. But as that exact command happens a jade like beauty is seen flying in the sky. People gasp at her beauty and background and say, hey that's such and such from that one clan she has a rank 8 martial spirit. Clearly the carriage young master is trash compared to her. Angered of being shamed in front of the crowd the carriage young master rides away in shame, but at the corner of his eye he sees the MC laughing. Men kill that trash for me says the carriage young master. And so the cycle repeats of the beauty saving the MC causing more problems. That's the whole novel.
First and foremost, the plot was riddled with repetition. It felt like I was reading the same scenes over and over again, with only minor variations to the dialogue or setting. As a result, the story failed to maintain my interest, and I found myself skimming through pages just to get to something new.Another major issue was the lack of creativity in the writing. The author relied heavily on tired tropes and clichés, and the characters felt flat and uninspired. It was particularly frustrating to see the main protagonist and heroine constantly referred to as "handsome" and "beautiful" without any real depth or nuance to their personalities.But perhaps the most frustrating aspect of the book was the confusing world development. The author seemed to have a lot of interesting ideas, but failed to fully flesh them out or connect them in a meaningful way. As a result, I found myself struggling to keep track of the various factions and their motivations, and ultimately felt disconnected from the story as a whole.All in all, while the book had its moments, the issues with plot repetition, lack of creativity, character design, and world development left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. I wouldn't recommend this book to others, and can only hope that the author will take these criticisms to heart in their future writing.
Trash translations, effort was clearly put in until chapter 40 then it's just MTL with zero editing. Good luck trying to understand what's going on with the story because names of basically everything keep changing, phrases are poorly translated, they don't make sense. Overall, it's unreadable after chapter 40. Don't bother.
1- The MC Personality make the story interesting2- The story line start slow but after a few chapters you get cough in the plot.3- No complains about the translation, the story is clear and I'm able to follow the author though 4- there is enough twist in this story to keep you glue to your table5- Please do not pay attention to the synopsis I think it is to abstract and someone need to write a new one.6- in overall this novel is worth your time.
READING THIS NOVEL IS LIKE WASTING YOUR TIME! AND THE STORY IS SO DISGUSTING! THE MAIN MALE CHARACTER IS ALREADY MARRIED BUT WHAT IS HE DOING?! FUC*ING THOSE LADIES AND HE IMPREGNATED RUYAN LIU HE GOT A WIFE DUDE! THE HECK! AND I THOUGHT THE TITLE OF THE STORY IS ABOUT THE HIS WIFE BUT I'M WRONG IT'S ABOUT HIM CHEATING, LUSTING, IMPREGNATING ANOTHER SHITT* WOMAN!
Haha, love it.This lord thinks it's good, the heavens have decided.Keep it up, make others lose their lungs, from laughter!Will the mc havr battle music? Will the mc have romance songs play at a certain moment?What will happen in this marvelous novel?
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"just like in canon" I can't count the number of time I read these word he don't lie when he say he's lazy Naruto is overpowered but nothing change in the story. no butterfly effect it's really the original story with a side story of Naruto getting stronger
I’m really enjoying this novel. Only at ch 127 but so far I’ve really appreciated all the modern references the author has put in it. Also I’m a big fan of the three kingdoms era so any decent historical fiction gets my vote. This story is much better than just decent is my opinion! Thanks Author!
A must read! Honestly I never thought I would found this gem. Honestly it is sooo difficult to find novels without polygamy these days:( Thank you for writing this author. Yanderes r so underrated seriously...
Just a fair warning;If you are here for romance, don’t bother.If you are here for the “death” and “emperor” name, dont bother.If you are here for attachable characters, don’t bother.If you are here for great character development, don’t bother.The novel is passable if you ignore everything said above, and instead;If you are here for a dense protagonist, do bother.If you are here for an idiot of a protagonist, do bother.(the difference between the two is the latter is about how he handles situations. Whether he considers the advantages and disadvantages of actions or not)If you are here for everything that comes with every Japanese harem protagonists (aka hero, ignorant about everything that concerns his harem, emotionally unstable, friendship, etc.), do bother.If you are here for an interesting plot, do bother.Unluckily for me, I had simply looked at the name and ended up being click-baited. I never thought I would be frustrated enough to drop it. What a journey (lasted til chapter 142) this was.. I hope I could forget ever reading this soon.
Author my thinking is same as yours......
