Guys in the first volume, I'm mostly focus on world building. In second volume true dual cultivation.So please give me some slack and support this novel.
Finally, a system that's not too OP. Very reasonable development over the trial chapters. I also like the humorous, slightly naughty, undertones that run through the story. It's not overdone and slap stick, just very pleasant. I hope this book gets chosen for sure.
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I read this on novelfull and it has yet to update for now it stops at chapter 123 if you continue to update at this speed you'll be caught up soon
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From the Synopsis, everyone could say that the book is very intriguing and must have interesting contents. Love your book author??For that reason, I highly recommend this book
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Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel:1. World Background (so far): 1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm.2. Story Development (so far): 2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours. 2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness.3. Character Design (so far): 3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now. That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea.. P.S. Good luck with the novel author.
Hope you like the journey until now guys.The Second Volume is going to end soon. Make sure to read it and comment.I appreciate all the comments presented by the readers which helped me edit my novel to a more readable piece of art.I have done the grammar edit for the first set of chapters. More are coming. make sure you stick with the novel.
It starts out slw but has great character developmentThe naughty bits are pretty late into the story but are very natural and do not seem out of place if you don't mind a little narcissistic mc then you will enjoy the novel
the plot is amazing and the story is very interesting, I highly recommend it, the personality of the protagonist and two other characters is very good, I really liked it, now the harem only appeared one and you can't talk too much about her
What the heck is this paywall? They promised when the moved a bunch of novels over here from fan sites that they would never have an absolutes paywall! Shocking!