why there is no updates it's been months has been passed but there is no updates still I am waiting but I want to read new chapters. when new chapter will release can you answer? Is this novel has discord or a schedule?
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I will give an honest review but will still give it five stars.This is a cliché novel with a system and also dungeons. If you expect something shocking, at most, you will find some mysteries here.And if you are looking forward to +18 content, this novel here will have it. I've never written anything of this type before, so I hope to do a good job.That's it. I hope you enjoy this work, and I intend to continue it for a long time.
Ok. This novel might be you first so I won't be critisising your writing..seriously ,though, it's fine putting none cannon transformations,but saying that freeza has trillions in power level and saying that the MC was shocked unconscious for a year while having millions in PL is just garbage bull****.FIX THE POWER LEVELS.Also I think that your progressing the novel too quick.had a nice "overpowered MC" idea at the start but it turned out sh*t
interesting concept but it might have been even more better to proof-read it before posting to see if you are getting the names and places accurate. for example - names - Captain Nakayamamoto - Capt.Yamamoto?; (MC)Zhang Yang - Publicity?; Garp - Karp/Kapu?; Kuzan - Green phaesant??; Sengoku - Warring States Period???; Steel Bones??; Places like Marine Ford - ma lin Fanduo/Marlene Vandor/Marin Vandou?? and when you say Liu Jian Ruo H0uo/Liu ren ruohuo - is this supposed to be ryujin Jakka???Two generic Suggestions if you want to take them:1) I would first recommend sticking to one form of addressing your own characters instead of making it in several varieties where the readers are kept guessing or analyzing to see if you are talking about what we think you are talking about.2) Even better for readers if you can stick to the original name given to places, people and things for the fan-fic instead of experimenting with alternate names that change from chapter to chapter.Looking forward to reading more fun chapters!!
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I'm going to put my humble self at average 3 stars because I'm not shameless enough to show off my broken English and cringe worthy of terrible grammar I put into this novel.I promise that I will trying my best to keep up with at least one chapter a day. Eventhough it took me two freaking days to come up with the first chapter. For some reason, every times I reread my work, I ended up fixing things here and there. 10 drafts later, I still found flaws and kept deleting this line and added this line. 20 hours later, I was banging my head against the wall and gave up rechecking the quality and post it here right away.Please have mercy on this poor soul and go easy on me ... MEAW!
I’m fully aware that as the story only has 18 reviews as of now, I’m bombing the review score. But at the same time, this story deserves nowhere near as much support as it seems to be getting. The concept is great and I love it, but the execution the author used is terrible. And yes, it’s the author’s first time writing but... that’s not an excuse to just ignore what readers are trying to say. In fact. The author is blatantly disregarding all the comments about the typos and spelling mistakes, or the story’s absolutely terrible grammar. Which, by the way, the story is littered with. Sorry, but I can’t support this train wreck. But here’s a promise, I’ll come back and fully support the novel of the author gets the story back together. Likely quite a few chapters need fully rewriting to make the grammar readable but trust me author... it’s well worth the cost. Props to the author for choosing to write, though.
I’m writing as a concerned reader worried that this book may be dropped. This IS the best book I’ve read form the start of 2024. This books relate ability is unmatched 100/10. I really hope this book can be continued I’ll follow every chapter closely. Also good luck to you because I know how much time and effort it takes to write a good book. I’m not the best at reviews but I hope I helped a little bit?
This Novel has gone premium despite the release rate of two chapters a week. It was promised 14 chapters a week but laziness and greed are the only motivators with this Translator.Do not support QI's hoarding of all good novels!