review for free fast pass. haven't read.
First of all I find the novel good and honestly it's a bit early to write review but still , I read first 6 chs and from it I feel like powersystem (add a bit more elements ) can be improved a bit as well as descriptions of mc doing things and the feelings of mc feels a bit bland but this are just small complaints as the novel is just getting started. Good work
I hope it's good. My only suggestion is please increase the number of chapters each day... thank you
From what I see it's author first job and it's good writing for first time, hope you will get better. I want to see where story is going so don't disappoint in yourself and continue
And i see my friend, my friend that usually accompany me to go to school.
"Ku ku ku, well then Master."
"Oh, I have not yet desu," Kenji answered.
"Sorry sir, a little incorrect, I mean 12 months".
"Whats potion master?" Jester asked.
Prince Yi Eul's royal spokesperson, Mr. Im frowned as he eyed the woman in front of them. "Young lady, don't you have manners? You're talking to the Crown Prince of South Korea. You should greet him and stop being disrespectful."
Coughing up blood and spittle, the God of Thunder grunted in pain as he was rained down upon with one bone shattering punch after another.
But the meteor men beg to differ