MaryAyaz
Kudos & Congratulations to you Dear Author! Actually I want more of the DelValle Family. Can you also write a book for Neo? I will surely support and read it! I love the way you write especially the straightforwardness and full of love! Never dragging & never boring. Very heartwarming every chapter
please update the rest of the chapters
This book is exactly the same as the silent alpha I read on a different app a while ago. I would have given you some credit at least if you changed the plot at least a little bit. Except for the character names and descriptions, the whole story is the same.
"Eat a little faster. Today is Father's seventh-seven memorial. We need to visit his grave." That's it. That's the line. And yet it says *everything* about Xie Zhao. Let's talk about this man for a second. He lost his memory, survived a cliff fall, spent two months drifting down a river on a log, recovered in a declining merchant family's home, and what does he do? He *cooks breakfast*. He snaps firewood like it's nothing. He cools down her porridge by pouring it between bowls because he notices she can't eat it hot. This is a man who was raised as a crown prince, trained since childhood in brutal military discipline, and yet here he is, crouching by a stove in a half-open robe, sweating in April heat, taking care of a girl who lied to him about her dying father's last words. The original Jiang He fell in love with him, and honestly? I get it. He's competent, quiet, kind without being performative about it. But here's the thing that kills me — he has no romantic feelings for her. None. The gratitude is real, the care is real, but it's the care of someone who sees her as the sister he never had, not a wife. And Jiang He? She's terrified. She knows the plot. She knows that once his memories return, she's done. But she's also watching him right now, in these quiet domestic moments, and I can feel her heart doing things it shouldn't be doing. The author writes these glances — her stealing looks when he opens his robe, her freezing when their eyes meet — and it's so painfully human. The dynamic is a landmine. Every kind gesture he makes is one step closer to her falling for him, and every step closer to her falling is one step closer to the tragedy waiting at the end of the book.
Good book. Nice plot.
This book is probably 30 percent English. Either release it fully in English or remove the description that it’s English.
liking the story. I hope the author is able to complete it as it has an interesting story line.
The book is amazing
Great story!
104 chapters 1-9-23
interesting story - loved it, waiting for Sharon and Daniel's story , dear author kindly update us .
Is the story worth the money, is look to long?
