Wow simply awesome from chapter 1, I Was hooked! what a great start, can't wait for more updates.
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I love this story i cant help it its too good Plus he's not the only prev. -w-
The characters are expressed nicely. The story is really interesting. Their feelings for each other and the way they care for each other I loved that. Author keep it up.....
This is one of my favourite stories.give it a try it's worth it. I look forward for update every Sunday morning. This story is close to my heart.i hope everything ends well for rishika
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[Reviewed on: 26-09-2021][Reading status: 7th Chapter] •••[Strong points:]- The first hook is in the synopsis 'eunuch mage' which leaves a whole room for imagination. - The pace in initial 7 chapters is kind of slow but believe me you'll be soon immersed within the descriptive style of the author.- A reasonable amount of explanation is sprinkled throughout the chapters, with an utter emphasis on the development of the MC. - The author did an immensely enjoyable part in turning the cliches upside down, the parents are supportive, siblings of the MC are teasing yet the bonding is there. However one brother sounds suspicious nonetheless. The master of the MC is determined to guide him too, hence you won't experience the typical chinese cultivation novel storyline. - The narration is highly readable, with less-to-none mistakes (although I didn't spot any in 7 chapters) which makes the reading experience smooth.- Everything flows within a vivid picture that the reader can imagine the whole scenario and surroundings effortlessly, I didn't face any trouble imagining and playing the descriptive combat with the beasts. - However there's no hook in chapter 1 and 2 but the gradual process of MCs daily life and the preparation for the test is also interesting. - Chapter 6 and 7 unlocks the spice of excitement when we see the MC getting his skills and awakening his aura and other abilities. - And tbh I've never seen such combination of the skills and powers (or perhaps haven't read yet on WN) and thus this work was a good one to read.- The verbal abuse and insult by the audience which MC received also shows us his desperation and hints back the reasons why he wants to leave the palace. - Then next comes the system, which is 'passed down' to the MC by his father. Which itself was kinda weird thing to read, but in a good way. Since I wasn't expecting the system to arrive in that particular aspect. [Weakness:]- The descriptions of the characters regarding their hair, eyes, figure etc was kinda unnecessary. As a reader I skipped them and I believe most would also skip those paragraphs since we can't really register so many characters by crafting their physical forms in head.- The title of the story of extremely bland which is a big deal I'd say, and since now I've read up to 7 chapters I'd conclude that it requires a change immediately. Title shoulde be catchy enough equally as synopsis or why would readers even bother to click on the book. Since synopsis appears after the cover and title. [Note for future readers:]Please give it a go upto 7 chapters at least before concluding anything about the book. Thank you~
listen man/women (you call yourself man but name suggests otherwise) your writing quality is on par with some shonen manga I read before (doesn't mean it's award winning but it's ok) it's just that reading Indian names in a webnovel is weird it just doesn't fit well with me if it were another app or thing (manga , anime , hindi novel ) i would definitely read it till the end but i don't know to describe it but it's weird
The 4th story and I hope it won't be the last. This fascinating story got me really addicted to all Chinese novels. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Ok this novels is voila and Qidian should really step up their web developers.I get lots of problem in their site.O crucible which melts my soul, scream forth from the depths of the abyss and engulf my enemies in a crimson wave!Pierce trough,EXPLOSION! Thanks for this Chapter!!!
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One of the funniest here. I really hope it’s gonna get picked. Charcters have great potemtial for developmeny and the plot seems to be original too!