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Overall, so far it's been a fun read. I can see a lot of potential with the current world building. Hopefully it can gain some traction to help boost the author.
World Background: Yet to see, but so far it looks good!! ? Story Development: Top Class! ?Characters: Su Xiaobai is best, followed by Matriach Su! Writing Quality: Best! Update Stability; Soooo Many chapters in single day! ?
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Great Novel! Great Concept. Hopefully it has lots of chapters!
it is a very good story to read and I promise you that you won't regret it
????Author Here!Thank you all for the support so far. I really appreciate it. Continue to vote for the story and also give your comments about the story. I will really appreciate that. I'm also open for questions about the story and suggestions. You can dm me on discord through my server. The link is in the synopsis. ????
Very good novel everyone should read. This story is outsatanding?. I read it when I get time Keep it up author ?
well author does our mc gets a revenge arc
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I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.
At first I quite liked it, but as other's have mentioned he's the oblivious or slow (to a crawl)-type MC typical of japanese writing, which in and of itself isn't inexcusable, but around chapter 60 I couldn't take it anymore.He starts creating underlings with his multiple minds, creates a part of 1 dude and 3 women (different bodies but all a copy of his own brain in them), and they immediately, for no reason, start having intimate group sessions while the main body has a wife (and a sister) he refuses to touch. 60 chapters of waiting for him to man up and do something on anyone, even his fiance, and within 2 paragraphs of making copies of himself they are having three ways.