It is well written for a beginner,beginning is good pace is slow but every 2-3 chapter some thing happens which keeps us hooked , first victor checking the mansion ,then his anger ,then his coming for meeting at exact time , then his business proposal , and then the tremors ,it build tension slowly
I'm gonna give it 5 stars just for promotion. This book's got a nice feel to it(I think?), and it's got interesting twists. It has nice grammar and imagery too so for those who wanna take a break from fantasy, waste your time here. It's up to tastes whether your time was worth it???
The type of Yuri in this novel is borderline NTR.This isn’t a Harem novel, it’s more polyamory as its ‘group love’ as opposed to MC being the sole focus.Apart from that the story is good and worth a read.
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Hello author,Just finished the 7 chapters and the writing is pretty good. Please do you plan on continuing? ( i pray you do!!) It will be a shame to stop now ...snif snif.
I really love this and can't wait to see what happens next! The chapters are a little short but I still like it. I hope the mc isn't just some know it all like in some other stories, but actually makes mistakes too. I also want to know more about the world where she is now... I think this'll be a good story and people should read it!
As I was reading I was pleasantly surprised by the easy flow of the story. It's easy to read and I didn't have to go over the same sentence/paragraph twice to understand what the author was trying to say. There is good pacing, and the paragraphs were nicely aligned. It tells me that the author has already grasped the basics of writing and has the potential for improvement in the future. The author should give themselves a pat in the back. Now for the cons: For most new writers when writing in the first person POV they do tend to overuse inner monologues as opposed to utilizing gestures and facial expressions as hints to the character's inner turmoils. Verbs such as frowning, smirking can also indicate mood. I would also like to see more active sentences rather than passive ones; it makes me more emotionally engaged.Overall it is a very good story and a worthwhile read. Other than the writing which has room for growth, the character development, world-building, and plot progression is intriguing and makes you hooked onto the story. Good job!
It's a very cliche story, nothing original or interesting, with writing that's hard to understand and pretty lazy. I feel like it's going for comedy but missing by a mile. Plus the cover art seems to be stolen.
Absolutely love it so far, just need a few more chapters! Great characters and always wondering what will happen next. Everything after this is just to satisfy character count sjdnhchduevbehdj
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no more updates??? lots of people seemed to be looking forward to it :(
I have read to ch532 and so far I have no complaints. I don't understand why you drop the book because of some people report. I loved reading it. I joined this webnovel app because of this book. Please continue translating