storyline looks very intriguing but execution is a failwriting style and quality can still improve, world background is fineGO ON! KEEP ON WRITING
Let's see if this Story will be awesome in the future....as well the Title says it all.... .. .. .. ... .. . ... .. .. . ... ... .
The story is really good. The characters are well developed and the author gave us plenty of background information. However, the sentence structure tends to fall apart and the pronouns tend to get mixed up, not to mention the past or present tense in some sentences will give you a headache. And to top it off the author went the privileged chapters route after only 130 chapters.
Good story idea, nice plot. The story development is slow but that's not too big of an issue. It's a good story.
The grammatical errors should be fixed tho. it's not much but it would greatly improve the quality of the novel.
The book is overall good. Very good if i may add but the update stability is eating me from inside out. Also spoiler ahead..........There are some real narcissistic characters. I have seen 2 most obnoxious one. One is a political fiancé and another is his disciple who is a "God-King".The fiancé kind of later gets less obnoxious but still obnoxious. The disciple is getting some development.BUT The most despicable thing in this novel/book is that,THE MC/PROTAGONIST DOESN'T GET ANY FRICKING CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT.I can't express the frustration I have felt with the lack of character development with our character who is the focus of our novel.As much as i like the concept of this novel, if I can't see any character development it will amount to nothing later.Also considering the fact that this is the first novel of our dear author, the writing quality is way beyond i expected. The only 2 lacking thing is the update stability and the lack of character development.Hope Author will take this in a positive way and bring us delight through his arts.
御兽：我能简化战宠进化路线Still ongoing 203 chapters so far but i think the translator change a few things
so I recently started reading this genre of the books and I love it ??
Just like the previous unlimited power novels, this one also seems so promoising and has great potential to be among the top novels on this website.
The first chapter was pretty much flawless, so good job on that in terms of Grammer and punctuation. It establishes the mc's personality greatly, showing his goal, ambition, drive, and rhyme, reason, everything. It showed multiple forms of conflict and comedy, and also showed a ton of world building as well as mystery. It flowed smoothly and read like a full on professional novel. Good job author, this is one of the greatest first chaps I have seen.
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Really enjoyed the 60 chapters released..It has a balance of talent, cultivation levels, skills and his cheats..His cheat is very unique and reminds me of 'Chu Li's Omniscient Mirror from 'White-Robed Chief' it's kinda OP if used correctly.. really can't wait for more chapters
la historia tiene un comienzo presentable, tiene un desarrollo posterior que no es desconocido, sin mucha novedad, es muy apegado a lo estándar de novelas de sistemas, como para complacer a los lectores que gusten de este estilo de lecturas, en cuanto a los supuestos reinos del cultivos y las rarezas de las cosas,plantas, materiales, se nota una desgana en cuanto a su contexto, es decir, son solo nombres vacíos, solo se colocaron como para que quepa en un supuesto de un entorno de mundo de cultivo, por eso no es tan recomendable