at first I thought that the story was a harem.. thank goodness it isnt. I like how the story progresses.. I am now able to imagine the setting of the story. I hope you change the cover..
Hey author. Liked your work. This is my second time writing a review for your novel. the reason?because I want to answer some of your questions.first: yes, I liked Ryan's past about his traumatic "First girlfriend" experience. I would like to read more about it.Second: The question you asked in your discord; about that, I would like to see Ryan turn into a vampire right away. but you said that that is not the main point here so it can't be done by changing the story's current plot. so let it be. Third: The pace he's evolving is great. Ryan's Ring System is perfect in my eyes. it would be nice to see Ryan going on another plants to hunt monsters with his System. I hope you upload those chapters ahead in the story. That was it from me. Thanks for the good novel.
It's super cool. Read IT
This is great so far but please stop making the mc afraid of the Tang girl it's sad to see he need to man up many she can help him find his mother but I think ur building by there relationship it seems like she the reincarnation of the girls he saved maybe she still died I don't no but I hope it's the case thanks for the hard work
It doesn't have a deep character development and it's fast paced but nonetheless I liked it in it's own way so keep the good work.And work on your English more you need that.
Update review: great story, but we still dont know what the mc is doing? He seems to be the evil mc since he sent 50 people to suicide, but the thing brothering me the most is that he doesnt have an objective and ambition..He is trying to build an empire I guess, but why? Why did he decide to build an empire? Why did he decide to go against the government, because he want to overturn the planet for his empire? Why is he trying to create an empire, what is his ambition? And dont tell me that it's because of *******, because it's clear he isn't going on for *******. Freedom seems less than 10% important now sinceFreedom =/= Building an empire and being the enemy of the whole world
It is an amazing world of fantasy that comes alive with your words dear author. ? Hats off to you for writing such a top quality work. The amazing words that perfectly picture everything that is happening in the book come alive in front of us because of you. Mind you story gets interesting after the first chapter and it goes better and better after every chapter. ❤❤.The real feel of war, emotions behind the war, the torment and some fun everything is perfectly combined in your book. I really loved your book and want to recommend it to every Santa'sy lover to read. It is really great work. It is outstanding.❤❤❤??
I'm wondering as to why the crown prince was killed. After reading it, I become inquisitive and addicted.next.... ?❤?
Side quest #1 - pizza (done now)Side quest #2 - doneSide quest #3 - doneSide quest #4 - doneJust waiting for chapters right now. Also, daily quest system seemed kinda new. I like that. Continue to give us interesting quests!
Haven't red a book about a grim reaper before so this particular one just excites me, despite it being just a few chps I'm already intriguing and hopefully author posts more so I can binge myself in it??❣️❣️❣️
A story about Esports? The story itself is unique cause considering that this platform has a lot of resurrection genre, cultivation genre, magic genre, etc genre. This story is refreshing, cause I get bored with mc with op or mc that are genius being an arrogant bastard that always f ck with woman. I'm getting tired.This story is refreshing, thank you for writing it, and don't stop! You have potential!
Lol, I pray next time the MC name won't be Gandhi...........................................................................................