This book is amazing! It got a likeable mc, the plot is interesting,good pace, good writing quality and great fight scenes. One small suggestion is to improve sentence structure in the early chapter
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Good series was wondering if you can help out an up and coming LN "The games for the wish" made by me
good work for the author it's a very good novel
This is my first novel so I'm going to be a little gentle with myself but if I had to be objective there are a lot of gaps and some terms that come up in this one, of course that won't stop me from writing and providing you with better quality work!
it's a great novel I highly recommend it.
a good read, ill note this writing style for my own novel
What a novel this is.. it has nice plot, character development, world building, and nice story. Hope the Author updates more....................................
Honestly you have a pretty good story going on,good character and development kinda like the saintess too with her godhood phobia.But I have one question author the MC is rather a little idiotic I mean the main villain is not some game character he is a human/God who can think so how can our MC think that main villain will follow the game story 100% with no changes.I guess it's one of flaw as I recently read in the latest chapter?
I'm not really into sci-fi but the action was the only thing that kept me going. since i don't watch sci-fi movies, I don't know how to imagine it and without characters description, it makes it harder.But apart from that, I basically like how it started, even though I got confused sometimes
muito bom, tem um ótimo contexto e os personagem são bem construídos.
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